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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-11-20 08:56 PM


Cold wind has laid siege
Whistles tune through leafless trees
Song that chills the soul

11-20-2000


© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-11-20 09:02 PM


Brrrrrrr....I know what you mean, Dennis! Lovely poem!

Denise

kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2000-11-21 12:09 PM


Very vivid, as always, Dennis.  Makes me cold just to think of it.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2000-11-21 06:27 AM


Bro, I'm going back to the fire. I'm sure glad I read that one first. Your crown has a few more precious gems!  Love, Sis

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



pegasus111
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4 posted 2000-11-21 01:22 PM


and the hits just keep on comming..great read.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kaile
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5 posted 2000-11-21 07:59 PM


dennis, the moment i read this, all i thought of was "even the hiberating squirrel shivers"...like to provide a sequel to this haiku using my idea?..thanx!


kaile
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6 posted 2000-11-23 11:36 AM


well i tried, dennis...hope you like it!!

Freezing Winter Haiku

Winds pierce with gusto~
Squirrel reaches for blanket~
Shivering cold still

now that i tried, its your turn to add to this thread...LOL

dgvarner
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7 posted 2000-11-23 05:44 PM


well written DEN!  i'm freezing now ..lol  

and way to go KAILE on that sequel  

hugs, g

Dennis L. White
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8 posted 2000-11-23 09:33 PM


Thank you for your Kind replies!

Sorry for that chill Denise.

Marilyn, vivid is good? I thought so! :^)

Ellie, You are too KIND, Thanks

Pegasus, A HIT? Thanks for your kind comment.

Kaile, I like your creative response,write on Bro.

DgV, I also wrote Embers Haiku and posted at the same time to balance the temperatures out. Check it out, it'll warm you up.

finally a haiku follow up for Kaile,

Chilly fingers stretch
To hold unsuspecting souls
In it's icy grasp

Thanks to ALL, Dennis :^)

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9 posted 2000-11-24 03:49 PM


this was chillin......brrrrrr



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Honeybee
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10 posted 2000-11-25 07:46 PM



Well expressed, I love the last line...so true.  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



kaile
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11 posted 2000-11-25 08:00 PM


wonderful use of personification in that haiku follow-up, dennis....
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