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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-11-20 05:17 AM


Desperation, loneliness,
My whole lifes just a mess
Reaching, longing for your touch
All I ask for isn't much
Needing, wanting just to cry
I stand helplessly with dry eyes
Aching, hurting deep inside
I wait hopelessly for your goodbye
Reading, watching all the signs
Words you're speaking resemble lies
Turning, leaving, head held low
Lack of support, so I must go.


With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

© Copyright 2000 Angel - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-11-20 05:35 AM


well written......terrific pace.....from the heart.

Regards

Jon

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-11-20 05:39 AM


the pain will ease..and you will learn to live with the scar. peace..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
3 posted 2000-11-20 03:28 PM


Just hold on...& (((((((hugs))))))))

Best

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-11-20 09:11 PM


Very sad, BWA, and very well written.

Denise

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