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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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your love, your sweet love, is swept away, the harsh wind of fate clutches,tearing, ripping you from my arms, leaving only bittersweet memories, their indelible footprints, seared into my mind, mournful tattoos adorn my bleeding heart, the plaintive wails, torn from an agonized throat, smothered by the roar of the merciless gale, are unheard, unheeded, trampled by a cadence of unforgiving circumstance the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ Wow ... such a gripping emotional outpouring. 'the plaintive wails, torn from an agonized throat, smothered by the roar of the merciless gale, are unheard, unheeded, trampled by a cadence of unforgiving circumstance' I guess we always hope that there is room for forgiveness ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Pegasus; Such an exquisitely heart wrenching poem of unreqited love! I adore the romance though! You surely have a romantic heart and a pen to go with it, but why waste that heart on someone unattainable, when you deserve so much more! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
A good write, love the way you express the emotion. Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Wow! This is heart-wrenching! That's a lot of pain packed into a few lines. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Stephanos
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
This is a very well written poem. I always like a poem with finely chosen words. Good diction is like shooting an arrow. I think you hit the bullseye here, in that your thoughts were very accurately and tastefully expressed.  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
my heart is warmed by your words my friends..thank you. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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