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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-11-15 07:49 PM



Forever Young
~*Marge Tindal*~

In my heart there is a place
that holds youthful Kodak's of you
Cherished for the joy they contain
when distance has found you far removed

A smile upon your face
the span of time has not erased
Flipping through the photographs
I'm reminded once again
of the joy that we shared
as long-time cherished friends

Look at us hiding in the old of black and whites
New joy knows such color as our laughter
We must schedule a new photo session
for old friends should have new pictures to share





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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bestgirl911
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1 posted 2000-11-15 08:13 PM


Marge...
I love this....Friends are wonderful treasures......just like you!

The smile upon your face,
The span of time has not erased.

I love that line!

Best

BSC
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2 posted 2000-11-15 08:56 PM


How perfect is this Marge...What a beautiful friend you are, and how full the hearts of your friends with the gifts you share.  Bonnie
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3 posted 2000-11-15 11:02 PM


Very beautiful, Marge!!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-11-16 12:07 PM


BestGirl~
Thanks, hon.
That is also my favorite line.
I'm glad you like it too.  

Bonnie~
I was reminded at a recent class reunion that a couple of friends were too precious to stay in the black and whites -
We've now got new photos of renewed friendships.
Thanks for such a sweet reply.

Denise~
You are just a wonder, lady !
Thank YOU !  
~*Marge*~
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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                       noles1@totcon.com       


[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-16-2000).]

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5 posted 2000-11-16 10:53 AM


hi, I liked your favourite line but your last line works for me too

"For old friends should have new pictures to share"...

oh, and i liked the way you incorporated colours into this poem....very creative..i think

Jon Mewett
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6 posted 2000-11-16 12:03 PM


Old friends are lovely to see and your verse is lovely too Marge.........

Jon

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7 posted 2000-11-16 03:43 PM


Kaile~
Glad to have you let me know that you liked that thought.
Thanks for the creative !

JonM~
Thanks so much for the read and your thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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Dennis L. White
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8 posted 2000-11-17 02:12 PM


Marge,
  Colorful tribute to friendship and shared memories, some even captured on film. The pictures of the heart are the best exposures!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Munda
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9 posted 2000-11-18 06:27 AM


Creative and beautiful Marge  
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10 posted 2000-11-21 01:05 AM


Dennis~
I agree - and if we're lucky - DOUBLE PRINTS !

Munda~
Thank you for the read and reply !
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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11 posted 2000-11-21 02:02 AM



Marge-
  now, how have i been missing this?  
  this is a beautiful tribute to
  friendship...and the snapshots, both
  'Kodak' and those developed in out hearts.  
  i'm loving it...and now i'm going
  to have to return to Open #11 to take
  another look at this one...  

/pip/Forum43/HTML/000158.html
  
  Check it out..  

  love and hugs,
  -vicky


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"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes




[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-21-2000).]

Broken_Winged_Angel
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12 posted 2000-11-22 04:02 AM


Marge,
  What a neat way to express the joy of sharing pictures with friends...and of having pictures of them...beautiful.  

Sunshine
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13 posted 2000-11-24 08:50 AM


I so enjoy watching you put yourself into your work....

another treasure...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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14 posted 2000-11-25 07:52 PM


BrokenWingedAngel~
Thanks, gal.
It's just so true that we need to update our
photos with friends while we can.

Karilea~
Thank you, sweet lady.
I'm doing updated photo albums for Xmas
and have had such fun getting into it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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