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bestgirl911
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0 posted 2000-11-15 05:36 PM


Follow me to dreamland...
Where the ocean meets the sky,
Where suddenly the waves reach out,
And find you asking why...

Follow me to dreamland...
Where laughter's like a breeze,
Where it echo's in our hearts,
Like it's carried through the trees...

Follow me to dreamland...
Where a tear is wiped away,
Where a friend is there to carry you,
As you face your fears today...

Follow me to dreamland...
Where your heart can take a rest,
Where you leave it in another's hands,
And it's cared for by the best...

Follow me to dreamland...
Where the night will fade away,
Where the sun will come to meet you,
As you start a brand new day...

Follow me to dreamland...
Where the sandman winks goodnight,
Where the angel's sing a lullaby,
Then tuck you in real tight...

Follow me to dreamland...
Where in time you can believe,
All the dreams you dare to dream,
Are easy to achieve.


[This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 11-15-2000).]

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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2000-11-15 06:50 PM


I'm right behind you on this one

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-11-15 07:11 PM


BestGirl~
This is just a perfect little piece of poetry.
I love the thoughts and you put them together so well.

'Follow me to dreamland...
Where your heart can take a rest,
Where you leave it in another's hands,
And it's cared for by the best...'


Wonderfully done.
~*Marge*~




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bestgirl911
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3 posted 2000-11-15 08:51 PM


Maria,
Following me to dreamland?

Marge,
Thanks hun your reply's always touch my heart.

Best

BSC
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4 posted 2000-11-15 08:58 PM


Ahhh what a dreamy piece this is bestgirl... what a lovely place you have shared... Just beautiful!  Bonnie
Denise
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5 posted 2000-11-15 11:00 PM


This is enchanting, Best! Very beautiful!

Denise

kcsgrandma
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6 posted 2000-11-16 12:23 PM


I think this is my favorite of yours, Best, very upbeat, and well-constructed, too.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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7 posted 2000-11-16 08:47 AM


let's see...Neverland is that way...Wonderland is over there...Disneyland is too expensive and Graceland...well that place is just silly....

Got room for a tag-along??? I don't eat much  

Sol

bestgirl911
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8 posted 2000-11-16 09:29 AM


BSC...
It's always nicer to share...

Denise...
Thank you very much...

KC....
I couldn't let you think I only wrote sad stuff...lol....I'm so glad you like it.

And  Sol....
The more the merrier...Hop in...let's go!

Best


Jon Mewett
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9 posted 2000-11-16 12:05 PM


I would echo Marge here......faultless and delightful.

Jon

kaile
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10 posted 2000-11-16 12:15 PM


lovely thoughts here....
the stanza marge has highlighted out was my favourite stanza

bestgirl911
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11 posted 2000-11-16 03:43 PM


Jon...
Always kind words...Thanks.

Kaile..
Thank you for stopping by and I'm glad you like it.

Best

Dopey Dope
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12 posted 2000-11-24 03:19 PM


Dreamland..........i think im already there.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


bestgirl911
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13 posted 2000-11-24 03:54 PM


Dopey...

I've been looking but, I think I took a wrong turn in Albequrque......lol.

Best

Songbird
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14 posted 2000-11-24 10:53 PM


I hope you are making a special book for your poems. This would be a great one to read to your children someday. It has a lullaby quality about it, that says so much. Keep dreaming and writing!
bestgirl911
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15 posted 2000-11-27 10:14 AM


Sept...
I have a special book where I write all my poems for my children to hopefully enjoy someday. Thank you....Maybe I'll recite it to them tonight.

Best

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