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pegasus111
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0 posted 2000-11-12 08:18 PM


what beauty this my eyes behold,
curled tresses long sweet face enfold,

cheeks tinged with rose like colored flush,
eyes downward caste in youthful blush,

hands folded neatly, smoothly clasped,
such sight my heart does firmly grasp,

full figured yet demurely dressed,
my gaze on this perfection rests,

words spoken softly without haste,
no other has my love embraced,

this time, this place, this woman blessed,
enjoin to put my soul to rest.



the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-11-12 08:54 PM


Pegasus; How lovely are yout words of praise bestowed upon your beloved.

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



Denise
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2 posted 2000-11-12 09:19 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Pegasus! Very lovely!

Denise

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-11-12 09:49 PM


Pegasus~
How gentlemanly romantic.
So softly your words touch the page with grace.
Lovely, sir.
~*Marge*~


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dgvarner
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4 posted 2000-11-12 10:02 PM


peg..this is beautiful!...such wonderfully romantic words for the one you obviously adore..  

hugs, dg
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"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey

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kaile
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5 posted 2000-11-12 10:10 PM


i enjoyed the smooth flow of this poem
pegasus111
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6 posted 2000-11-13 12:24 PM


thank you for the kind words my friends..this was written for a very special lady.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kcsgrandma
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7 posted 2000-11-13 12:50 PM


Lovely thoughts, pegasus.  The lady may be special, but so are you.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Jon Mewett
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8 posted 2000-11-13 04:52 AM


Very nice......very warm .....very loving

Jon

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9 posted 2000-11-13 07:16 PM


oooo I love it, shes a lucky lady

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


pegasus111
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10 posted 2000-11-14 10:16 AM


KC..ya gonna make me blush..hugs

Jon..thank you for your kind words.

Maria..and I'm a lucky man.



the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Romy
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since 2000-05-28
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11 posted 2000-11-14 10:37 PM


This is so romantic, my husband could never describe me like that in a million years! (although I know if he could, it would sound like your poem)
I'm going to show him this and ask him if this is what he means, when he tells me he thinks I'm cute!

Very elegant writing!

a_little_girl
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12 posted 2000-11-14 11:33 PM


I really like the romantic descriptions used in here, pegasus. It is really beautiful!!
--Little Girl

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