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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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Bouquet of Flowers This spring I planted two flowers in my garden, Best friends these flowers came to be, One day to my dismay, A weed grew between the two, The weed seemed to be a split of these two friendly flowers, I pulled this weed up, Still it came back. Everytime I pulled, With a vengence it came back. The last time the weed came back, wrapping itself tightly around the flowers. These flowers loved the little weed. I let the weed grow, by the end of the summer I realized that it was not a weed but another flower who with my other flowers brightened up my life with their beauty. Thanks to Ria and Brian for giving me the courage to post this. Brian thanks for your help in reformatting. [This message has been edited by Callie (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Callie~ This is just lovely. The power of friendship that nourishes growth is a wonderful thing. My thanks to your friends, too - for encouraging you to post this little beauty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wonderfully written verse, and I agree with Marge true friendship is a beautiful thing. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Love the idea here  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
The depth of this poem is OUTSTANDING! I love it! Powerful writing..... To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Callie; Your use of analogy is done beautifully to describe the wonder of friendship. Lovely! Ellie< !signature--> le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Callie, I think this is the first piece of yours that I have seen..looking forward to many more..it was lovely. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
You left me with a smile D.  |
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