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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Dawn arrives and it's just you and I cuddled up in this armchair rocking away the ending of night as the sky slowly lightens so gradually and even you pause in your fussing and turn your head slightly to watch your little hand unconsciously clutches my nightgown and I pull you a little closer as you watch your first sunrise and the clock ticks softly and the shadows slowly fade and morning says hello |
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Doughboy New Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 4 |
This is a very sweet poem. Welcome to Corner Pub and Passions as a whole. I know you'll love it here.  [This message has been edited by Doughboy (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions! This is precious! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Thank you both, so much, for the wonderful welcome! dreamkeeper To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DreamKeeper~ This is a precious entrance into the family of friends and poets. A great big Welcome ! to you. Enjoy the friendship and talent found here. We've plenty of both - and thank you for adding to it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is sweet, dreamkeeper! Welcome to the Pub. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Welcome this is so sweet Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is a lovely poem. And such a precious moment in life...well done!  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I welcome you as well. Your poetic entrance is wonderfully tender and heartwarming. I look forward to more of your poems! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Dreamkeeper, Great first post! Welcome to the Pub, Pull up a chair, (Bartender, get our new friend a drink), Please relax and DO tell us more! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
LOL! Thank you, Dennis! Motioning to the bartender...I'd like a long island please! Thank you all so much. I really look forward to joining in this wonderful group. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and then i will have a long island with you too this poem brought a smile on my face...a tender moment this is indeed |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh..this gave me chills--i miss my little bitty baby...shes 2 1/2 now and thinks shes grown...  this is so sweet..and wonderfully written..i'm glad i didnt miss it! hugs, dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oops! and i wanted to put this in my personal library..chkg box this time now i can read it again and again without having to go searching for it...  dg |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Very tender and beautifully written moment..........Welcome Jon |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
oh, this is precious...if rocking chairs could tell stories...this would be one |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* swinging from the rafters up above....never been one just to sit at the bar *L* Welcome....and please...share summore.... Sol |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Welcome to Passions!! This is a great start and I hope to see some more!! --Little Girl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so warm and sweet would make a lovely verse in a card (now don't take that the wrong way, I am so picky on cards today that say so little..this one would warm a heart, light a face with a smile, or bring a tear to wet a cheek.) in other words, I loved it. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Thank you, everyone, so much for such a warm welcome. Am really enjoying being here and getting to know everyone. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a perfectly tender piece of a mother's heart you have shared with us Dreamkeeper ~ Such a beautiful write. Bonnie |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Oh this is so sweet! You really capture those quiet moments I once had with my own babies! Loved it! Welcome to Passions! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
look what happens when you go back into the archives. . . this is wonderful. . . I'm glad I looked back here. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This poem is really a tender moment, as anyone who has racoked a baby in the wee hours knows! I would also like to welcome you here. I am a very new member also. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How did I miss this? Very tender moment. One of my favorite subjects and the poem was so well done. Joyce |
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