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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-11-11 06:07 PM


Delicate moon beams,
Reflect off rushing waves,
Lies beneath the shore.


Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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Celeste
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1 posted 2000-11-11 07:35 PM


I have often thought of attempting haikus but so far haven't.  
You show beautiful imagery and a depth in this one I really enjoyed.  Nicely done!

Denise
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2 posted 2000-11-11 08:19 PM


Beautiful, Maria!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-11-11 08:32 PM


lovely, Maria...

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4 posted 2000-11-11 10:22 PM


Pretty thoughts, Maria.

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- Les Miserables

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5 posted 2000-11-11 11:25 PM


This was wonderful. A great haiku!



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6 posted 2000-11-12 09:13 AM


Dreamkeeper - You should after your first one you'll write a million of these things

And thank u all for your kind thoughts

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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7 posted 2000-11-12 10:08 AM


Maria~
Pretty thoughts indeed.
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 2000-11-12 10:44 AM


And thank u too marge

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Dennis L. White
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9 posted 2000-11-12 01:36 PM


Maria,
Your haiku are always delightful, this one is no exception!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



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10 posted 2000-11-12 09:20 PM


Nice one, Maria
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11 posted 2000-11-13 04:30 AM


The Moon seems quite bright through the window tonight...........nice

Jon

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12 posted 2000-11-13 06:03 PM


This is wonderful, I love it   Another great haiku!

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13 posted 2000-11-13 06:59 PM


Dennis - And you always have such kind words to say about them, thanks

Kaile - thanks much appericated

Jon - love those nights, thanks

Lakewalker - thank u too



Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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