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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Darkening Rain The day was long and hard old body aching and full of pain. My spirit was low, almost broken driving home in darkening rain. Key turning the lock, door opens and there she was with welcome smile. My darling, arms open, glad to see me we hugged, kissed, snuggled awhile. She wears one of my favorite shirts my precious, lovely, little tramp. Spirit soars upward on wings of love burning with fire, wearing cold and damp. We go on to play in the shower her response better than imagination. We giggle as we play all warm and wet love so wonderful, so worth chasing. The day was long and hard old body aching and full of pain. As I come home to my loving wife she kisses away, darkening rain. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is a warm and loving piece..well done..I know the feeling. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ What a delightful read this is ... Lucky man you are ! Smart woman she is ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Daniel...this is so heart warming. I really love this one. Say hi to WW for us. We love and miss you bro...Love and lots of smoocheez... Sis< !signature--> How can you save me? When the dark comes right in and takes me, from my front walk and into bed, where it kisses my face and eats my head. Shivaree [This message has been edited by WildChild (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
hi little bro', what a lovin' love poem you have conjured up for WWoo, good way to earn those extra points for sure and this one will surely do it. You take care now!!  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
so sweet and lovely thoughts Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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dena*mystrawberries Junior Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 15 |
what a good ending to what i know was a lousy day...glad to know that a smile came of something that night, tramp...much love to you and wendy....as always.. "boss lady" |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
hey... thanks to all for the wonderfull comments! mucho appreciated! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Nice to be able to read your poetry again Dan.. ^_^ And it is just as beautiful as always.. Love, Lynne |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi,i liked the way you made reference to your first verse in your last verse....very cleverly done |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thanks much, haven't had a lot of time to spend with y'all due to the cd project... appreciate the comments! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Daniel, beautiful poem! You will let us know where we can get our very own copy of the CD when it's ready, won't you? Denise |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
sure will, Denise! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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