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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Relentless Rain Spores Relentless ..........rain spores .....................spilling slowly downward Dampening .........inner ..............subconscious fears Grazing .......displays of ..................useless paranoia Controlling ..........my minds ..................sense of logic Merging .......close to ...............create stormy eyes Enough ......control to honor ......................it to distance Replaced ........with deep .................focused prayerful stare Destinations ............vision sits .......................awaiting us [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
LD, I like this a lot! I wish it would rain, but alas...  It is snowing! Alicia |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
It's raining here. Great Job! Best |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
You did it again ! Love it !!  |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Ria, I like this one a lot! Good to see you're getting your muse back.  Dawn |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lost Dreamer, WOW, Interesting collection of thoughts in a clever presentation! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ I gather the rain about me, and let it infuse with refreshed thoughts. When God sends rain ... it's definitely my choice. Nice thoughts here - 'Destinations ............vision sits .......................awaiting us' Nice to see you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written, Gloria! Denise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ria; Thought provoking, lot of meaning here.I enjoyed this. Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ria, wow excellent poem, powerfully penned especially loved the last part. Destinations ............vision sits .......................awaiting us "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Been raining non stop her, thanks for letting me see there something good in it Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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