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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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If You'll Let Me Stay ~*Marge Tindal*~ If you'll let me stay for just another day I promise this to you I'll never let you go I'll write the songs of love softly on your heart Sung on notes of the night if ever we're apart I will hold you tenderly within the chorus of sing-along Played within your heart when you think the music's gone If you'll just let me stay I'll pen another verse to this song A classic reminder of the love I've sung for you all along ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is quite charming, Marge..lovely refrain. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Marge, the beautiful way that you express yourself, how could he not? |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Doo Wah Ditty Ditty Dum Ditty Dooooo....Just lovely Marge. Bonnie |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
"I'll write the songs of love, softly on your heart." I love that line. Best |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
If you'll let me stay My heart words, I will lay Upon your precious lips To kiss a smile each day... (just foolin' with your thoughts) I like the way you share your heart words with us  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Please stay and write another verse! Nakdthoughts, I love your thoughts! Very nice. The two of you should write a joint poem! Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
oh Marge....too many images fill my mind to even start listing them...but this.. *shivers*...oh my Marge....this is good... Sol |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- wonderful as always. who could possibly deny this heartfelt request? BEAUTIFUL hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ Thank you for the encouragement to write more. I appreciate your thoughts. Debbie~ Awwww ! Thanks, hon. Bonnie~ LOL ! I love ya', gal ! BestGirl~ Yeah ... me too. And I thank you. Wynter~ Oh, I just love inspired verse. Thanks for sharing. You can 'fool' with my thoughts anytime ! Alicia~ Thank you very much. SolticeSon~ Sorry 'bout the shivers, but glad you like. Thank you so much. VickyGirl~ I was waiting for you ... I knew you were in here ... Tee-Hee ... you're a doll ! Love ya, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you for your reply. I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Song written on the heart, I've come over all mushy, very nice love it Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
brought tears to my eyes. So touching and gentle. Wonderful. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ Oh - how sweet ! I just plain downright like that mushy stuff ! Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. DreamKeeper~ I appreciate your tears. Some things are just meant to be that tender. I'm glad this was one of those. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i can always count on you to deliver the goods |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Awwwwwww ! What a sweet, sweet thing for you to say. *Hugs* to you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cool marge! you and i couldve penned this one together..i think i titled mine "if only you'll let me stay".. lol this is beautiful hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ LOL ! Guess we could've at that ! Thanks for the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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