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kcsgrandma
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0 posted 2000-11-05 11:52 PM


                 Twilight

Caught between conscious and unconscious,
Resisting wakefulness, unable to sleep,
Thinking of you in meaningless phrases,
Dreaming without images, I am
Lost in the nether world of twilight sleep.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-11-06 12:36 PM


KCS~
Yes ... I know just what you mean.
Me too !
~*Marge*~



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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2000-11-06 02:07 AM



Marilyn-
   oh yes!  
   how i can relate to this.  
   been there...am there.  
   love it.  

   hugs,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Jon Mewett
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3 posted 2000-11-06 04:39 AM


This is a good snapshot of my mind ...ALL the time......Phew am I awake yet?

Jon

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2000-11-06 07:03 AM


Oh!!DO I know this one, especially lately ...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



pegasus111
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5 posted 2000-11-06 05:47 PM


It seems you've captured all of our conditions..very nice..well said.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kcsgrandma
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6 posted 2000-11-06 06:49 PM


My, we are a sleepy bunch today!  Too many late nights at the computer?  Thanks all for the comments.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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7 posted 2000-11-06 10:55 PM


*squints his eyes and looks at your groggily*

Eh?! Sleepy? Not I!

Wonderful poem, a great read.




"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

kcsgrandma
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8 posted 2000-11-07 12:03 PM


Thanks, Dopey.   Better get to sleep soon.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Solstice Son
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9 posted 2000-11-08 04:08 PM


oooh...very nicely done...Rod Serling would be proud..Kudos

Sol

kcsgrandma
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10 posted 2000-11-08 10:45 PM


LOL  Thanks Sol!  I hadn't thought of Rod Serling.  Puts a new slant on the twilight sleep experience.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

dgvarner
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11 posted 2000-11-09 01:44 AM


Thinking of you in meaningless phrases,
Dreaming without images, I am

yes!  i'm there!  *sigh*

seems we're all spending quality time with our computers these days...LOL

great little ditty mar..

hugs,dg


"i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..."

kcsgrandma
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12 posted 2000-11-09 05:58 PM


Well, dg, we're obviously in good company.  Yes, this might indeed have something to do with late nights chatting.  Can't seem to quit, though, can you?

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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13 posted 2000-11-10 02:16 PM


a perfect way to decribe this feeling

I'm there right now

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


kcsgrandma
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14 posted 2000-11-10 04:56 PM


Thanks, Maria.  Glad you woke up enough to stop in.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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