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Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27
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They know where I am!

0 posted 2000-11-04 03:14 PM


Two Special Feather Dusters

Senile replica's glazed within infantile minds
sifting drained repulsiveness while drifting onward.
Seeking ancient  fossilized ideals, slowly sneaking crown,
tomorrow's tarnished shadow borrows yesterday's frown.

Frightened fragments placement tightened destiny's hold,
a woken silenced wisdom through sweetly spoken harmony.
Hearkening willows texture, to-night's darkening be calm,
pondering kissed moon petals gleam meandering a dream.

Sold waxed delusions as told within this fairy tale,
two special feather dusters swiftly drew the fire.
Billowed language inept while pillowed as friends,
tickled in fashions colors, lightly pickled in desire.


© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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1 posted 2000-11-04 06:10 PM


Phew............a trifle complex....but interesting.......keep taking the thingy.

jon

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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2 posted 2000-11-05 01:51 AM


lol.to Jon.lol!!  lol..so cute.thingy

A most interesting read.   Marcy

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-11-05 03:33 PM


A most complex read but nice all together



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Justin Nuendo
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since 2000-02-05
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Ozzz
4 posted 2000-11-06 02:34 PM


Ancient fossilized ideals?
Senile replica? Infantile mind?
Writing my autobiography here?
Dang ye Crachet! Yar far too kind!

Frightened moments…
Our lobotomy room?
Two feather dusters?
What happened to yar broom?

Waxed delusions
AND fairy tale?
King and his Red!
Or you and Chip & Dale?

Inept, lightly pickled
And pillowed up
Sounds like the 'Stute's
Daily gooey grub

Now let me ask ya
Just to give me mind a rest
When was the last time
Ya did yer doping test?

Not that I don't like
A riddle or two to solve
Nothing too crazy for this
Wondrous mind to evolve

But let's not overdo it
Here's a rum for ya Nurse
I'm sure our good ol' Doctor Moose
Can cure ya from this curse  

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
5 posted 2000-11-07 07:08 PM


Hmmm... Where the hell have I been?
Why is it my head doth still spin?
Is this fog a product of to much gin?
Say there Nurcey you got any asperin?

It's time we run up the adrenalin.
A quater in the juke for some Zeppelin
Ya just gotta dig that Page's mandolin!
If you got no partner then grab a mannequin.

Say what Nuendo? This Just-In!
The Crayon King is a harleguin.
Well laugh all you wish my Stute kin
Cause this party is about to re-begin.

Lady Red... Hand my my nito-glycerine!



Lady in Red
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 147

6 posted 2000-11-10 05:36 PM


Hmmm...why are you dusting feathers ??
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
7 posted 2000-11-10 08:46 PM


Feather dusters.... I have fond memories of those.... especially the glow in the dark ones... Very interesting poem, excellent use of images this one left me completely dusted

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Moon Dust
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8 posted 2000-11-11 01:14 PM


ooo different, I like it

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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