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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304


0 posted 2000-11-04 01:10 PM


I started standing but now I’m seated
My little poem has been deleted
When I woke up just full of joy
But now I am a......... saddened boy
Some words that never were put down
Could have made some people frown
But I accept the fault was me
I think I’ll go and watch………T.V.


Jon Mewett

Hey  D ……..I still love Yer!


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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
1 posted 2000-11-04 01:26 PM


ROTFLMAO Yeah....
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
2 posted 2000-11-04 01:35 PM


  Well, this doesn't sound too repentant, but it was good for a smile.  I always enjoy your work Jon.  Just don't come out of that corner until your time is up!      

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
3 posted 2000-11-04 02:11 PM




Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2000-11-04 02:33 PM


*sits down next to jon and watches tv*



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-11-04 02:34 PM


Dontcha hate it when that happens?  

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
6 posted 2000-11-05 02:00 AM


Funny response - wish everyone could be so good humored about it!  
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-11-05 04:07 PM


Okay...you can come out of the corner now, Jon!

Denise

I still love you, too!


Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
8 posted 2000-11-05 08:30 PM


Jon,
  Your poem got jerked for some imagined words? How absurd!
Scoot over and hand me that remote, will ya?
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
9 posted 2000-11-06 06:33 AM


hmmm...making me rather curious as to what  it was that was deleted...



~Wynter Bliss


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
10 posted 2000-11-06 01:36 PM


lmao....This is just adorable....

Best

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
11 posted 2000-11-06 02:11 PM


How could anybody be upset over an imaginary word?  
Maybe you could at least re-write it in a different way so that we all could read it!
I'm curious!

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