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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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comprehension of femininity You look at me: a sense of appreciation but why then does your gaze cut below the neckline and sink into the depths of my breasts? I am sure if I let you, a lake of drool would flood my valley and trickle down deep within me, how you would plunder that very heart of me. I put on my makeup like the glossies' advice but am I truly being the perfect woman or just a clown to satisfy your desires? sure I could do many tricks you want to see me make a balloon animal out of that protruding stick?? Well am I not the moody one each month Just to bear the false chance of a child for you! Oh I cry when I bleed but didn't Jesus scream when they pinned him up? Just like Mother Mary only I can understand that loss, That bond with life, I create but you just fire your guns blowing down the living and the dead only happy when you’re asleep or full of head. Taste of me, sample my delights, of course I know my powers, my ability to cast spells upon your lustful eyes, but my sex is my defence my one weapon in this masculine asylum. Though we claw, scream and fight just like God cursed us to do at the fall of Eden, and while I may sharpen my knives I could not bear not to have you at my side, In your brutal nature there are certain charms a dim comprehension of femininity and when it rises to the top like cream upon my mouth, It is the sweetest pleasure you can give. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Very very erotic Brian.....this is art at its best.....implied. Jon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you go girl LOL   Well I KNEW you would do this like no one else... and you didnt disappoint me ... you have PMSed your way right to the point awesome "rant" ... I have always enjoyed the spin on gender you are able to pen with so unbiasedly challenge met big time later-adam-and-eve-gator me |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I like this one a LOT Brian. Very cute and true.  Dawn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What cream is that you're talking about? *grins* nice job! A great read and you handled the challenge very nicely.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well done Brian - but I expect that from you!  Chris |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Brian..this was exceptional..wonder how a man can be so in tune with the female gender..hmmm..been paying attention, you sly devil!..lol the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Jon, thank you for your reply. Jan, you know how I am when I have time of the month... LOL.... "able to pen with so unbiasedly" ok blushing from that huge compliment, but if only it were true. A big part of me of me is fully male, fortunatley my feminine side is not afraid to show itself. THanks for your wonderful reply, Eveagator. Thanks Dawn. D.D, the question is what cream do you think I am talking about?? a double sided a metaphor that one was.. thanks for your wonderful comments.THanks Chris... expected what may I ask? just kidding, thanks for your wonderful reply. pegasus111, in tune with the female gender, don't know about that one, I try to be and I have a deep respect for women, but I also have some male traits that might seem to contradict that..anyway ranting here. THank you for the wonderful reply, and yes I am always paying attention "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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