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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Silent Word The saddest sound I ever heard Came from the deadened, silent word. A look of nothingness in eyes, When words non-loving reached my sighs. And how I gasped to breathe the air, To purify that deadened stare. Forget not ever, the shock unheard. From deadened look of silent word. It reached into, turned inside out, The crying words, that could not shout. Instead they numbed me, thoughts and feel, Such words of hurt, that seemed unreal. Muted, dampened, soaked in tears, Now left behind those youthful years, When happiness and loving thrilled, His deadened eyes, have all but killed. But say I, to myself in thought, A present to me, soon be brought. For wishes, dreams I've had, but few In want of making memories, new. Released from mind soon, hurt of old, Making room for words that mold, To treasure keep, the silent word. This time, of loving only, heard. Beholding soon, your pair of eyes, Blue pools that drown me into sighs. Surrounding me in silence sweet, To coat my thoughts in warmth, complete. With touch of gentleness, your song, Will slowly turn, to right the wrong. And in my silence, love shall reign, To shower me, in life, again. ~Wynter Bliss |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
 Oh Wynter, This is painful yet I do see your hope and determination. You are so deserving to find and receive love and I know that you will. Here comes a (((((HUG))))) at you right now. Connie |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Connie, your name is truly one of compassion. Thank you for such warm words and I send >>huggz<< in return. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Wynter! Denise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Wynter; I was so touched by this beautiful poem. My interpretation is that your childhood was painful, as mine was, and you have risen above it, dealt with it, and blossomed in spite of it. Love, Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Denise- glad you could enjoy  Ellie- my childhood was the best that I can recall, although one of many children. All necessities were met and my parents were always there for us. My words were about my second life...the married years...one resulting in silent hurt and non-words of aloneness ending most recently what I thought to be a wonderful life...although fraught with a year or two of abandonment of loving. I am sorry your childhood was painful, and I hope the present and future holds only joy and fulfillment for you. huggz for your thoughtfulness ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Silent words of pain and hope, past and future. Truly enjoyed this poem ! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A poem of transition...........words are silent on a page.........but they can say so much.....nicely written. Jon |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Munda- I thank you for stopping to read Jon- nice to see you, I always appreciate your thoughts ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
you just described 14 years of my deadened silent word..I know your pain. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Why hello there!?! This was great....you described the past few months of my life. Made me feel right at home to know others feel like me.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow pegasus..14 years..I have had only two months and it almost killed me...but I am recovering slowly but surely...thank you and {{hugzz} ~Wynter hmmmmmm D_D I wish more of us felt happier then to have these feelings..but I did end it with hopefulness..didn't I? (sometimes I get the feeling I am being followed...whaddaya think  ~Wynter's smiling tonight. "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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