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bestgirl911
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0 posted 2000-11-03 03:29 PM


It started with a look,
Deep in each other's eyes.
The longing and the passion,
Soon began to rise.
You gently put your hand,
Underneath my chin,
The butterflies are moving,
In my stomach, deep within.
You started leaning closer,
Our lips about to touch.
Is it getting hot in here?
I feel a little flush.
Then I felt your sweet, soft lips,
Gently touching mine.
Our passions, now, unfolding,
Just in the nick of time.
I recall it clearly,
Every single day,
'Cuz every time you kiss me,
I still feel the same way.



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BSC
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1 posted 2000-11-03 03:32 PM


Awwwwww Best ~ This is just so sweet!!!  How beautifully you have written of that special moment.  Bonnie
Solstice Son
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2 posted 2000-11-03 04:21 PM


..grrr....*pouts moodily* i am so envious...

beautifully done m'dear...

Sol

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2000-11-03 05:48 PM


Sigh! How deliciously romantic!!!!!!!!

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



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4 posted 2000-11-03 08:16 PM


ahh so sweet

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Alle'cram
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5 posted 2000-11-03 10:24 PM


Ahhhh!!! This is sooo sweet!   I just floated along (trying to remember)...good job!   Marcy
Denise
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6 posted 2000-11-04 07:19 AM


Very nice! Beautiful!

Denise

Lakewalker
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7 posted 2000-11-04 06:39 PM


Hey, nicely done   This is very sweet!

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Christopher
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8 posted 2000-11-05 01:58 AM


awww - ok, I got the warm and fuzzy's goin' on...  

Chris

a_little_girl
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9 posted 2000-11-05 02:00 PM


Wow...this is some great romance...I like the style and imagery that you used here. This is some great stuff and you should write more of this.
--Little Girl

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10 posted 2000-11-05 03:27 PM


A very sweet poem! I liked it very much!



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Suzanne Arlene
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11 posted 2000-11-05 04:55 PM


I enjoyed your poem It makes me remember my special kisses  
DawnG
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12 posted 2000-11-05 05:08 PM


This brought back memories of my first true love. Thanks for the great memories  

                                Dawn

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2000-11-05 08:24 PM


BestGirl~
You drew the precious memories perfectly !
You will always remember that first kiss !
Yep ... always !
~*Marge*~


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snowpants
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14 posted 2000-11-05 10:49 PM


Very romantic poem!  You captured the moment perfectly!!  Great write!!

sp  


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Jon Mewett
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15 posted 2000-11-06 04:26 AM


Lush...warm ..soft ...and sensual.....romance so beautiful.

Jon

nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2000-11-06 07:06 AM


Those softened lips will get you every time..I definitely can relate to this one...as my favorite part of an evening is when my face is cupped into his warm gentle hands and his soft lips meet mine.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



bestgirl911
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17 posted 2000-11-07 08:36 AM


Thank you all sooo much for the wonderful comments.....*blushing*....lol....thanks.

Best

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