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niiiccee311
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since 2000-10-31
Posts 6


0 posted 2000-11-03 02:56 AM



As i sit and wonder,
what would become of me,
If and only if i had gone under,
under the trance that wasnt to be,

Life is suposed to be fate,
in my line of duty,
life was a way of putting down that trait,

So many people u meet,
So many people u greet,
The loved ones pass and new ones come on,
Great times pass and u dont want to move on,

As i sit and wonder,
i am glad to be who i am,
That i hadn't sent anyone into a sad blunder,
i am glad my head is out of that deep sham,

Life is suposed to be fate,
i dont really like to believe,
What isnt so after my first date,
can't say i didnt want to achieve.


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Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-11-03 03:07 AM


Oops seems like abit of a let down........don't worry ........move on...fate will play her hand.

And smile

Jon

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-11-03 08:19 AM


good relationships arrive when you least expect them..don't concern yourself too much about it..nice read.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
3 posted 2000-11-03 02:13 PM


Remember hun....

It creeps up on us,
When no one is around,
Makes it home inside our hearts..
Without the slightest sound.

Best

Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-11-04 06:04 PM


This is expressed well, good job on the poem!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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