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bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
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Clio, MI , United We Stand

0 posted 2000-10-30 05:08 PM


From the moment I saw your beautiful face,
I was yours forever.
And I knew right from the start,
We'd always be together.
I may not be the perfect one,
But, I try the best I can.
No one can love you more than I,
I'm your biggest fan.
I love to watch you sleeping,
And holding on so tight,
To all the hopes inside your heart,
As you dream on through the night.
I love to kiss you softly,
Right upon your lips,
And hear you laugh hysterically,
When I steal another kiss.
I love to feel your hand in mine,
It doesn't matter when.
The softness of your skin,
It's like pure heaven.
I love the way you make me laugh,
Every single day.
And how you always cheer me up,
You have that special way.
I love to hold you close to me,
Protect you from the world.
Hold you close forever,
My little boy and girl.
But, most of all I love you,
For the people that you are.
And for all the madness in my life,
Your my shining star.


Ellie & Chris
I'll always be your biggest fan....and you'll always be my shining stars...love, Mama


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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-10-30 06:21 PM


Oh Best ~sigh~ how perfectly you have written of a Mom's heart....and the gentle love that's always there for our little darlin's.  This is simply beautiful.  Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-10-30 07:45 PM


I love this mothers heartfelt poem for her precious children, How sweet they sound and such a loving mother you are! Love, Ellie
I also happen to like your daughters name too,  hahah

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



Denise
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3 posted 2000-10-30 07:48 PM


There is nothing like the bond between a mother and her children. This expresses that beautifully!

Denise

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
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Clio, MI , United We Stand
4 posted 2000-10-31 12:20 PM


Bonnie...
Every word is exactly how i feel for them...They make my life..Thank you so much.

Ellie...
As always your replys touch my heart.

Denise...
Thank you so much.

Best

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

5 posted 2000-10-31 04:58 PM


You made me smile...giggle...and put me sincere need for a good long hug...thanks Best  

Sol

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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6 posted 2000-10-31 05:40 PM


This is so very sweet!
Deb

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-10-31 08:11 PM


BestGirl~
You brought to mind such vivid memories
of when mine were small ...

'And hear you laugh hysterically,
When I steal another kiss.'


I can hear them now !
Thank you for sharing this little jewel.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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niiiccee311
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since 2000-10-31
Posts 6

8 posted 2000-10-31 09:50 PM


hey,

i really like how u talked bout ur kids, u sounds like a very protective parent, well its good to have someone like u around..

mr. niiiccee311

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
9 posted 2000-11-01 09:40 AM


Sol...

(((((((hug)))))))))

Deb...
Thank you, They really do keep me going.

Marge..
You always have the sweetest things to say..Thank you so much.

Niiiccee....
Thank you and welcome hope you find as warm a place as I have.

Best


Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

10 posted 2000-11-02 04:14 AM


A very nice image is painted here...a mom and her kids snuggled in bed....perfect.

Jon

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