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bestgirl911
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0 posted 2000-10-29 11:09 PM


Sometimes I still talk to you,
Though I know you can't reply.
I close my eyes and think of you,
An angel in the sky.

I tell you all my secrets,
Just like when you were here.
I look to you for peace,
And always feel you near.

I sit beside you often,
And talk the time away,
Knowing you will always be,
A guide throughout my day.

I keep you very close to me,
Even though we are apart.
I keep you in my memory,
But, mostly in my heart.

Although I cannot see you,
And although you can't reply,
I know you're up there listening,
An angel in the sky.

© Copyright 2000 Ranea Ratza - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-10-30 02:09 AM


BestGirl~
This is just lovely.

'I keep you very close to me,
Even though we are apart.
I keep you in my memory,
But, mostly in my heart.'


It's the way I feel about my sister.
Thank you for sharing this with me.
~*Marge*~


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Broken_Winged_Angel
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2 posted 2000-10-30 02:31 AM


Sweet...This made me cry.  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

BSC
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3 posted 2000-10-30 08:01 AM


bg ~ What a beautiful poem!  Such sweet and tender thoughts of your special angel.  Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-10-30 08:15 AM


Ah, so beautiful a tribute to someone who had to be so wonderful! Your faith is a gift to us all!   Love, Ellie

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



bestgirl911
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5 posted 2000-10-30 08:42 AM


This one is very special to me. It was written for my best friend who passed away at the age of 25 due to complications from childbirth. And I thank you all so much for the wonderful reception to this one, they really touched my heart. Thank you.

Best

DawnG
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6 posted 2000-10-30 03:04 PM


This poem brought back a lot of emotion for me. I lost a cousin of mine when I was a senior in high school. I was in Fl at the time of his death and couldnt get home for the funeral. I felt so bad for so long that I wasnt able to tell him goodbye. I wrote this never ending letter to him that whenever I need to talk to him I just add to it.  Helps me to remember that he's keeping his watch over me in Heaven as he did on Earth.
                                Dawn

bestgirl911
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7 posted 2000-10-30 04:48 PM


Dawn~

Just remember hun, they are always up there listening to and guiding us.

Best

Denise
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8 posted 2000-10-30 08:03 PM


This is very touching and beautifully written, Best!

Denise

Moon Dust
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9 posted 2000-10-30 08:24 PM


love this. So beauiful.

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Solstice Son
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10 posted 2000-10-31 08:24 AM


Exceptional hun..truely...i would gush more...but the poem says it all..well done..

sol

bestgirl911
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11 posted 2000-10-31 04:47 PM


Denise...
thanks so much hun you always say such nice things...

Maria..
Thank you, I appreciate the comment.

Solstice...
Your comments are always kind as well..Thanks.

Best

BloomingRose
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12 posted 2000-10-31 06:47 PM


Really beautiful, and it's comforting to know angels are always near.
Deb

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