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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
The way the sun lightened Streaks in his hair And the way I could always Count on him being there The way I was lost In hopeless devotion And the way we walked Hand-in-hand by the ocean The way he carressed me With caution and care And the way he never Refused a dare The way he laughed At all of my jokes And the way he was always Polite with my folks The way he wasn't sentimental It wasn't often that he cried And the he carefully chose the flowers When his grandmother died The way he always Hid behind a mask And the way he always did Whatever I'd ask The way he made me Breakfast in bed And the way he deceived me Like a bullet of lead The way he hurt me On a warm summer night And the way he never looked back During his flight The way he found himself While I was still lost And the way he was prepared To hurt me at any cost The way he quickly accepted That it was through And the way I cried when I realized it was true The way he declared that He didn't love me And the way he smiled When he said he needed to be free The way he looked at me Just didn't seem fair And the way he left When I could only stare The way I loved him Of my life he was part And the way he left me And never gave back my heart if you love someone, tell them. you never know what may happen tomorrow! Alicia A. Renzelman |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Alicia; So sad a love story, but hearts heal and love will blossom once again. Lovely poem, written so well. Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I agree with Ellie, things will heal... but I also understand that it sure doesn't feel that way while you're going through it. Well executed poem! Christopher |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahhh..I have been there..you will scar but, the wound will heal. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I started out liking this 'guy' but by the end, I wanted to smack him! You will survive..and I hope you find someone who doesn't become like the guy at the end..  |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Ellie~ Love is the one thing that can preoccupy all of the world for hours. Thanx for the encouragement. Christopher~ There are very few people who realize that. I'm glad someone understands me! Pegasus~ I don't think I'll scar this time. Just a lot of blood loss. Poet~ You have my permission to smack him. Anytime! Alicia |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
It is such a sad love story, but to repeat again, time will heal, and love always finds a way. Sometimes you don't need to search, it will find you. |
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