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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-10-24 12:40 PM



Once upon a time,
I fell in love with you
With all the things you showed me
And everything we loved to do

Once upon a time,
You ran your fingers through my hair
You told me you loved me
And I knew you would always be there

Once upon a time,
I thought I knew who you were
I was drawn to you
Like a fish to a lure

Once upon a time,
I was a lost little girl
In a blinding abyss
Of your hair's wavy curl

Once upon a time,
A lost love was found
In a pit of despair
Lying wounded on the ground

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if you love someone, tell them.  you never know what may happen tomorrow!
Alicia A. Renzelman


[This message has been edited by Alicia Renzelman (edited 10-24-2000).]

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a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
1 posted 2000-10-24 11:21 PM


Isn't love very much like a fairy tale? After reading this poem, I think so. Not all romances end this way, broken and dirty and such. Take marriage in the past, for example. You must admit they make a pretty good couple.
--Little Girl

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-10-25 12:32 PM


Once upon a quiet night a poem struck my eyes and told me it's author was quite an excellent writer. Thanks for sharing your talent here with us  

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