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Brian New Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 3Cortland, NY |
Not exactly good by any means but I'm venting so please have patience  Back on the Upswing One second! One moment ago Life ended, Nothing was left. My heart bereft Of those incorporeal Feelings due to any human. Moments before I bewailed fate, Cursing self in hate; Loathing a living earth, Coveting dead moon. Turns out I judged too soon. I found myself Happy once again. Heck, to be frank Everything is fine. Broadly I'll smile now, Until, of course, Next time... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Brian. I think this is great! It describes very well the roller coaster ride that life can be at times. Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
He is down...he is up...and down and up...gosh, this captures well, the way it is for most of us. Hope to see more of your words soon. -Lady |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brian~ Welcome to Passions and to the Pub. You're gonna like it here. 'Just Writing', huh ? Well, this shows talent ... so keep it up ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Welcome! Life is pretty up and down for a lot of us. Glad you can see the humor in it. Enjoyed reading this.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Not bad for a first piece...or venting it out. --Little Girl |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Geez..you're giving me motion sickness...up..down...but great mood swings. Nice entrance. wish you would have stood still. My legs are still wobbly from the ride. Ron |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
what a delightful description of lifes ride.....Welcome to Passions! you'll find lots of friends in the pub.... Best |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Brian, I think that for "Just Writing" and "venting Fellings," you are an amazingly talented writer. Wonderful first post! Welcome to Passions. I hope you will find great friends here in the Pub! ~Alicia A. Renzelman |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
really liked this, its nice to see it gets better instead of worse i mean |
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