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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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i write the words that makes the whole world cry i write the words that are not heard... sitting on the stage in cyberspace no one can see my face all that is known are my poignant words black on white lace curlicues, parings of a fragile mind hoarded renderings of voiceless aspiration slowly gathered by the light of night dark moon, luminescence face chained forever toiling in a empty place no one can see the rain that slowly drips from the glowing fountain of internal pain as i frantically tap out measured words shaped desire gives voice to naked soul gifted to those that cannot cry in agony i bear the sorrow of those that don't see, that i send out each nightsong of my words to bleed winged transformation along glowing matrix lines endless search for a safe haven timely thoughts pushed forth with low moan swirls in deep ebony night deleted with mindless stoke of key once again, the words are lost… i write the words that makes the whole world cry i write the words that are not heard... oh god! i write the words… (hands over face, the poetess weeps) Lady Noggins aka Wordancer ...come, dance with me...in my world of words... |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
the words of the Wordancer are heard..always know that.they etch themselves on our souls forever. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written, Lady Noggins! I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady Noggins- oh, my friend...your words are heard loud and clear, and they are truely appreciated and enjoyed. feel free to make this your 'safe haven' anytime.  loved this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Peg, my love, the dancer hears your thoughts denise, thanks for the read and I'm glad you enjoy my words ah vicky, you are so kind. Isn't it amazing what comes from a strange fey thought, late at night in front of a computor sceen. Actually, this came out totally different than the orginal intent...seems it wanted to be sad and yearning and lonely. Yes words, do make the true feelings come out. Thank you, my friend for your kind words. -Lady |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyNoggins~ 'all that is known are my poignant words black on white lace curlicues, parings of a fragile mind' Oh, my ! This is exquisite ... the entire render so well phrased. What a wonderful talent you have. Thank you for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
I have to admit I'm really fond of that particular phase myself...thank-you, marge for noticing it and for your kind words. -Lady |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Lady, Breathtaking!! ..and this poem is one reason I enjoy reading poetry! Marcy~~ "chained forever toiling in a empty place" ~~ excellent, excellent...and I would know! So enjoyed... |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
first of yours that i have read, and i am glad that you write the words this is wonderful, *sigh* sad but wonderful |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Many words just begging to come out. I applaud you being able to write the words. Hoping my own words will be able to come out soon.. Dawn |
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angelface Junior Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 40Savannah area, Georgia |
"i write the words that makes the whole world cry i write the words that are not heard..." reminiscent of "Soliloquy of the Solipsist" by Plath. good choice of words... very sad, but i think it describes how all of us feel at some point or another... |
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