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Silver Blade
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since 2000-10-19
Posts 2


0 posted 2000-10-19 09:49 PM


While Escorting White Knight

Thou hast asked where I've been
Studying souls both thou and him
Seasons past, separate born
Now alas true strength rejoined.

Born was I of speed and steel
born of heart two brothers heal
the plague traverse upon this land
brothers, two alone will stand.

To save the worlds guiding light.
Once for truth both did strive
Hearts to save the world alas
Free the key thy lovely lass.

The fight and wounds thy brothers seen
almost healed take care with thee
Adventurous night dark this day.
Corruption gone pain now in its place.

Thy brother lives, a gift from me.
I'll guard thy back yet unseen
Take thy brother with rapid speed
Now listen sharp here's a key.

Through forest of night
and 'Praires' Glade'
Travel straight
to 'Deadmans' Cave'


© Copyright 2000 Silver Blade - All Rights Reserved
Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
1 posted 2000-10-20 02:23 AM


What a wonderful way to enter Passions.. Welcome to the Pub.. I hope to see more of your work posted.. Very well written.  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-10-20 04:25 AM


Welcome.........on to the cave.........please

Jon

wordancer
Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
3 posted 2000-10-20 07:32 AM


I enjoyed reading this...does it continue?  Welcome to passions, I have found this a quite nice place to be.

-Lady

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
4 posted 2000-10-20 01:01 PM


What a wonderful beginning.....hoping to see many more.....Welcome!

Best

White Knight
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

5 posted 2000-10-20 01:45 PM


Silverblade, my thanks be known,
Until a day more tangible shown,
For the restoration of my brother,
Together we'll ride, as he recovers.

Hurry my Brother, do not tarry,
Lest our kingdom be ripe to bury,
Our enemines advance with fevered pride,
To Deadmans Cave is where we'll ride.

Winds of west and clouds of night,
Cover us on our straightward flight,
Through the treacherous Praires Glade,
Safe to the appointed cave.

Sweet Esmeralda, hear mine heart,
I'm soon to face the firey darts,
But I'll soon return to gather Thee,
And save Thee, from thy slumber free!

Knight Blackthorne
Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 14

6 posted 2000-10-22 09:38 AM


Brother alas I have seen,
I know now what true love means.
May the gods guide our flight
As we travel this very night.

Myne arm strength weak,
Myne heart beats strong
Thus we'll reach
'Prairies Glade' by dawn.

The evil embrace
That held me close
Was by love
Itself revoked.

The blood that flows
Between us still
Was stonger than
That evil guild.

Have the lad bring
our steeds
Thyne quest is myne
Let's hasten speed.

As we ride this cloudless night
I will share all evils plight.
Seeking bigger things than light
Thy lass's part in their sight.

The downfall sought
for all knights
I fell victim
Their grip was tight.

The key it seems
we must retrieve.
The symbol for all
That they decieve

A symbol yet
I've not seen
My brother fear not
We'll have this piece.


[This message has been edited by Knight Blackthorne (edited 10-22-2000).]

White Knight
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

7 posted 2000-10-22 07:51 PM


My Brother of departed day,
My thanks to God I’m giving,
That we may have this time anew,
You’re once more amoung the living!

That you should once more be alive,
‘Tis a miracle of such grace,
To have seen you once laid so low,
But now I behold thy face!

Silver Blades strong magic,
Hast revived thy very soul,
Thy body now doth heal,
New life you now shall know.

Brother, thy eyes have been opened,
To have knowledge of true loves worth,
Perhaps this latent understanding,
Played a part in thy rebirth.

Though you be my Brother,
Thou be a stranger in many ways,
Separated as we were when children,
Only recent we’ve shared our days.

Speak to me, my Brother,
Share the burdens of thine heart,
That we may grow together,
Till that day we will next depart.

Knight Blackthorne
Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 14

8 posted 2000-11-09 10:40 PM


As we approach
'Prairies' Glade'
My brother listen
at myne fate.

A youthful thug
as I grew
Myne only home,
the streets I knew.

A man took me
off the streets
taught me to fight
and how to think.

Well I recall
the days I was trained
myne mentor, father
was Silver Blade

A sword of lightning
as I recall
A man of good
Loved by all.

Through the journeys
of this land
Blood to never
leave myne hands.

As a knight
Dost thou recall,
The lady I loved
That began it all.

She disappeared,
without a sign
I was lead astray,
Entranced to be blind.

Lady Skye was
lost from me.
Wounded in pursuit
Forced to retreat.

I was made
to believe
through fates evil cloak.
Love weakened me.

The darkened shadow
upon my soul
I could not stand.
Thy wounded and alone.

We've discovered
Twins of birth
Whom knows our origin?
Secrets there lurk

Brother now thy
knows my past
Share my brother
Let us fill the gaps

Let us rest here
at the edge of the Glade.
I'm still weak
soon we'll reach Deadmans' Cave.

White Knight
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

9 posted 2000-11-10 09:33 AM


My dear brother of tarnished past,
We are here together at long last,
Sharing truths of our own life trials,
Allow me to share mine for the while.

I was raised by wonderful parents true,
I was taught virtue and wisdom too,
But the greatest thing I ever learned,
Love, truth and compassion, not be spurned!

Raised to value ones' integrity,
Lessons planted deep within me,
My gentle parents lead the way,
For me to be the man I am today.

In my youth my rebellion flared,
Yet my parents showed how much they cared,
With tender patience, weathered the storm,
Drew me back into honors form.

My parents died in my seventeenth year,
From the plague that threatened far and near,
Befriended by the Smith of Silver,
Worked in his forge down by the river.

His clients included Knights of fame,
His crafted swords they came to claim,
This exposure to these noble Knights,
Did cause me desire to join their fights.

The Smithy learned of my desire,
Of to such ranks, I did aspire,
Gave me a sword of precision blade,
Twas a gift, I never paid.

The steel, a gleaming masterpiece,
I practiced till my strengths release.
Emblazoned on this weapon of war,
Were curious markings, I'd not seen before!

I advanced in the ensign ranks,
Gained a reputation amoung the flanks,
I fought hard and I fought long,
To be worthy, to the Knights belong.


That sword has always served me well,
That Smithy's' gift much valor tell,
And the markings had always been a mystery,
But a revelation now has come to me!

The same curious markings I now have seen,
On Silver Blades' steel, they did sheen,
Though Silver Blade to me is unfamiliar,
Was he my benefactor for this blade of silver?

But wait, dear brother, I'm not through,
For I see your blade has those markings too!





[This message has been edited by White Knight (edited 11-10-2000).]

blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
10 posted 2000-11-10 01:37 PM


Wonderful guys.  Keep writing for you & me, I'm really enjoying it!  Thanks.
Silverblade,
Great first post!
Alicia A. Renzelman

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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
11 posted 2000-11-10 01:46 PM


Welcome siverblade love the style hope to see some more. white knight and blackthone nice one

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


wordancer
Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
12 posted 2000-12-21 08:38 PM


Up to go with the White Knights continuation.

I thought this was wonderful when i read it the first time around.

"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

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