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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-10-18 12:36 PM



Winging My Way
~*Marge Tindal*~

In dreams
my thoughts have wings
I can fly, I can fly
Across your heart
Across the sky

Winging my way
in and out
Dreaming is a state
I don't want to be without





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Broken_Winged_Angel
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1 posted 2000-10-18 02:25 AM


"Dreaming is a state
I don't want to be without"

How very true...If it wasn't for my dreams I would've be lost long ago..   Very well done Marge.

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2000-10-18 07:45 AM


ooooMarge this has a mystical feel, Fairies hiding somewhere in this poem? love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-10-18 09:30 AM


Marge,
  .......if you don't have a dream, how're going to have your dreams come true???
Yes, dreams transport us to places our feet could never carry us to! I like this poem!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



bestgirl911
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4 posted 2000-10-18 09:54 AM


Marge

Very nice dreamy feel to this one...love it.

Best

Honey Bunch
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5 posted 2000-10-18 12:30 PM


Oh Yes...I agree entirely Marge but...hmm?..I wonder - could dreaming be a "reality" we wouldn't want to be without?  
Either way, your poem speaks for many.

Helen

Denise
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6 posted 2000-10-18 09:07 PM


Sweet dreams, Marge!  

Denise

kcsgrandma
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7 posted 2000-10-19 01:01 AM


Very nice, Marge!  Interesting thought, flying across someone's heart.   Something to dream about.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Jon Mewett
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8 posted 2000-10-19 09:13 AM


Dreams are good ......trying to live them is good........this is great.

Jon

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-10-19 09:53 AM


BrokenWingedAngel~
Hearts make wishes through our dreams.
We remember them with smiles in our waking hours.

Ellie~
Hmmmm !
If you saw fairies -
they weren't hiding very well, were they ?
LOL !  
They just may be peeking out ...

Dennis~
Oh !  I like your reply !  

BestGirl~
Thank you for your reply.

HoneyBunch~
Most dreams are wishes -
If we're lucky they become reality.
Thank you.

Dennis~
Ahhhhhhhhh !  Yes !

KCS~
When our dreams take flight - I smile.

Jon~
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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