quietly simple, a confirmation

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quietly simple, a confirmation

Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2000-10-17 01:51 AM

We Are One

Sitting out back together
competing with the trains
for a little talk time.
Reading the love poems
written for another
knowing, we are one.

She smiles and cries
as she hears the words
tenderly, lovingly reminded.
She is not threatened
nor does she threaten
she knows, we are one.

Our separate friendships
even relationships
inspire us to be better.
Creation, lovingly nurtured
love carefully grown
always, we are one.

We as one, perhaps
attracted to another
maybe even, we love.
Yet, essence tis mingled
complete me's recreated
forever, we are one.

We snuggle out back
discussing these and those
as we do everything.
Life goes on, the world turns
our union is our bedrock
together, we are one..

bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

1 posted 2000-10-17 09:28 AM

Oh Dan, I especially like this poem. I wish I had written it....speaks to me and says so much of how I feel toward my sweetheart, of thirty four years. Lovely, Marcy

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

2 posted 2000-10-17 12:24 PM

Dan,
I love this. I agree completely with Alle'cram. - the whole 34 years thing. 1 1/2 year. Thanks!
Alicia

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

3 posted 2000-10-18 02:22 AM

This is so sweet and romantic...It made me think of my last honey..We were together for almost four years before going our seperate ways..

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-10-18 09:22 PM

This is serene and beautiful, Daniel! Just lovely!

Denise

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

5 posted 2000-10-19 01:14 AM

This is both quiet and simple, and that's what makes it powerful. Lovely work.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

6 posted 2000-10-19 04:43 AM

thank you each for your loving comments!
Bless you,

bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"

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