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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Beautiful Eyes Your eyes, your beautiful eyes A trust, bond between revealing, exposes your pain we talk silently, you cry. I feel your whisper knifing into my awareness you cry your tears, softly. Your life, your failures pour into, consume, capture braided mutual understanding. Your eyes, your beautiful eyes cloud with water, suddenly filling with life’s betrayal we cry your tears, together. Mine, yours, ours, once upon crashing surf like in waves futility lovingly shared until small saddened smile. Sharing again; a word, another smile a hug, a touch...just knowing I cry your tears, for you... your beautiful, beautiful eyes. (For Dena, once again...) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Wow, I'm sure she would like this its very touching and a little sad. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What wonderful tenderness you show here! She is fortunate to have you to share her tears. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautifully done, Daniel, very touching! Denise |
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dena*mystrawberries Junior Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 15 |
hi...i guess this would be for me?????much love to you bleeding...this hits number three on my list (gotta say that the strawberries will never leave number two)...thank you for your friendship, your love, your respect (just let me pretend on that one, kay???) most of all, thank you for listening...and for chocolate covered strawberries, the barry white voice, the...oh well...some day, hopefully i can inspire something more than just poetry????lol....love you always...dena |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Wow... Maria-looks like she did, eh? thank you, kcs...yes tis an intense friendship...one that inspires. thank you, Denise...special indeed! and Dena, how sweet... joining to post a reply... i am touched. Wow to have number 2 and 3 on the five best compliments in life menu! I am honored by your friendship! by the way, Wendy Woo thinks it's precious that I write and you love the poems... As for listening, I am your friend, my dear. Friends listen, and hug, and share, and confide, and I am your respectfull friend for as long as you allow (even if you don't invite me along...pout, pout, pout). As for inspiring something more than poetry...you already do, my friend (see above, please). Love you too! "the girl with those beautifull eyes!" bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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dena*mystrawberries Junior Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 15 |
we didn't go anywhere or do anything...if there is any poetry out there to descibe my weekend so far, it would be by poe...lol..truly, the poem has been the highlight...;p''' |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Daniel- this is just beautiful...so lovingly written.  i like it lots. ((((hugs)))) -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
Reading your post and the replies has made me feel like a "fly on the wall" but a very happy fly. Wonderful feelings expressed here - thank you for the read. Helen |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thank you, vicky lol yes Honey...afraid some of it is "insider" kinda stuff...glad you could get past that! Thanks you for your imput! Appreciate all our family here at NetPoets! love ya!< !signature--> bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" [This message has been edited by bleeding (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
What a wonderful, heartfelt poem! I love it. You spoke of Wendy Woo. Is this the same Wendy Woo that played poker in Video Poker Room 6? Best |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
hey Best, thanks for the imput! Could be the same WW... although she usually plays Majhong (sp?) or Bingo...she may have "stepped out" to play some poker... she usually plays bingo and such as "Mrs. Moo" or "SisterWendy" i think... although i don't monitor her net activities...i have "caught" her in the bingo halls several times. She's always trying to win me something... bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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