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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Golden memories Frame the edges of moments That mattered the most |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is perfect, Septsong! Denise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Positively perfect! Dear friend, love, Ellie |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful!  |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
It looks as if we're going to run out of superlative on this one. It really is wonderful!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
very nicely done! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ditto the rest...very good thought |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Septsong, I like this but is it a haiku or a senryu? Either way it is delightful! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
OOOPS, I must have stuttered, sorry, LOL Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Memories are like photos arent they, and this one's lovely Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Glad you enjoyed it everyone and Dennis maybe it is a senryu, I'm not sure, was wondering about that. If it is it was an accident..that fell out of my head. LOL |
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