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Wobbly Head Bob
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0 posted 2000-10-12 01:25 PM



You are what I think when no one's around
Only when I blink I can't hear your sound
A voice that trickles all over me
A touch thats motionless in beauty
Watch your eyes on mine and wonder
If I'm there or have I gone under
Duel beats of chest captivates my soul
Not part, nor half of me, but whole
The sky was never so far away from here
Impassioned as lovers brings the stars near
I'll touch Venus and rename her for you
I'll search for the moon and bring back two
A ride so high for grounded lovers be
The pinacle of lust that sets us all free
A swirling notion of curious touch
Wandering hands have never felt so much
The dove, your soul's familiar in flight
With mine, the mighty ram, this open night
Two and one, Earth and sky, light and beyond
Who and none, birth and die, night will respond
To my dream of my resplendent wonder of love
Who cast the shadows from light, my one and only dove


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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2000-10-12 04:03 PM


This is lovely and so sweet

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Honey Bunch
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2 posted 2000-10-12 04:13 PM


Yes, very nice indeed!!  

Helen

Wobbly Head Bob
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3 posted 2000-10-12 04:17 PM


Thank you both much for reading and responding to this piece...Yeah, I think she'll like it too.  
Denise
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4 posted 2000-10-12 10:23 PM


Very pretty, Bob!

Denise

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