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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2000-10-09 01:00 AM



dont walk away from me
in your manner of nonchalance--
it hurts to see you turn from me
this way.

loving you my way
costs me.
loving me your way
costs you--
lets dont miss out on us...

the tears that have fallen
are crystal fragments
of my heart,
not just a handful of raindrops.
how do i explain to you...

i was broken--
i am mending,
but i was not left without caution,
flashing lights.
life is too uncertain
to make abrupt promises...
still, i dont want to lose you--

i would never ask you to wait
on love to change--
only to stay
and recieve it as it is,
as it can be,
as, perhaps it might be one day...
dont walk away from me...

--dgvarner

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she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without  
-clint black




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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-10-09 01:28 AM



dg-
  this gave me chills, my friend.
  am feeling this one with you.
  i hope he understands and is
  patient with you...and careful
  with your heart.  

  great job of conveying these
  painful feelings.  

  love and (((BIG HUGS))) to you,
                         -tricks




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


dgvarner
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2 posted 2000-10-09 01:31 AM


tricks...     thanks....

blue, dg


she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without
-clint black

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
3 posted 2000-10-09 12:20 PM


dgvarner,
**~**~**
Definatly chills...  This is absolutely amazing.
Alicia

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-10-09 11:12 PM


DG~
This one kind of aches ...

'i would never ask you to wait
on love to change--
only to stay
and recieve it as it is,
as it can be,
as, perhaps it might be one day...
dont walk away from me...'


Seems a more-than-reasonable request to me.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-10-09 11:40 PM


alicia..thank you for amazing!  glad you enjoyed  

marge..much appreciate your reply..thank you for sharing the ache..

hugs, dg


she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without
-clint black

kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
6 posted 2000-10-10 12:17 PM


How many of us have not shared this ache at some time?  You are right, you can only accept love as it is now, one day at a time, and hope for the best.  I hope it works out for you.  Hugs!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2000-10-10 09:17 AM


K..i tend to love my friends passionately.. *sigh*...i cant help it..  even certain new friends get that piece of me..but this one wanted a different love..

"life is just too uncertain to make abrupt promises"...and love is too uncertain to make promises so soon...

i dont like to lose people..when he wanted to walk away, because i couldnt promise him the kind of love he thinks he wants from me..well....it hurt  

anyway!  didnt mean to write a book!  

thanks for reading me!!  and for your heartfelt replies  

hugs, dg


she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without
-clint black

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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8 posted 2000-10-10 12:32 PM


dg, a very sincere piece, a true friend wouldn't walk a way.
I believe love has to start with friendship, how can you love someone if you can't be a true friend.  

Parker

[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 10-10-2000).]

dgvarner
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Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
9 posted 2000-10-10 01:25 PM


thanks PARKER..i'd hoped to hear from you    

your words make a lot of sense, i'll have to agree with you..

love is difficult..and confusing..but mostly it just is what it is..cant make it something its not..  

and true friendship is worth a million  

hugs, dg


Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
10 posted 2000-10-11 02:50 AM


This sent shivers up my back ...  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
11 posted 2000-10-12 12:52 PM


BWA..wow..you liked aye?     cool ...thanks for reading  

hugs, dg


she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without
-clint black

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