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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-06 12:16 PM


Interlace threads of lustre and silken beams
weaves a fantasy of gold taffeta dreams
cross stitch kisses around my throat
embroidered whispers, mmm makes me float
knit one purl two, a blanket under the stars
needlepoint goblets of red wine not far
a gold cable stitch on left hand ring finger
a chain stitch linking our lives together
before the bobbin soon comes to an end
hurry, spin him into this dreamweavers blend
and as this interweaving dream stitches to a close
finishing with satin stitches, he spins me a rose



Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.

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1 posted 2000-10-06 07:57 PM


Victoria~
You have certainly woven a beauty here.
Very creatively done.
I enjoyed the stitchery.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2000-10-06 07:58 PM


Victoria, this is very beautiful! Just lovely!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-10-06 09:26 PM


thank you Denise and Marge..i wish i knitted in real life like i can in my poem ha ha..
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4 posted 2000-10-06 11:00 PM


very rich in language and imagery
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5 posted 2000-10-06 11:59 PM


thank you citiZen-one..still knitting away as fast as I can..
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6 posted 2000-10-07 12:25 PM


You have woven a lovely tapestry of words.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

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7 posted 2000-10-07 01:00 PM


thank you very much kscgrandma..and i hope you have a nice day..
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