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CitiZen-One
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since 2000-09-22
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New Mexico

0 posted 2000-10-05 12:16 PM


A Poem Called Oct. 6th  1:17 am @ 5spot
Dear Jill,

I can’t help but think of you on this very special day,
because you gave yourself to me, in a such a loving way.

Today is a day that is so bitter-sweet for me,
because I can’t help but think of all our Wonderful Memories.

With Warm Hugs and tasty Sweet Kisses we touch each others nose,
And In our energetic arms, we held each other Close,
So now I raise my Zinfindel - To you a make a Toast.  

Today I light a candle in my heart for you my love.

For a distant friend from whom I live so far apart,
But even with all the distance in the world, you are close in my heart.

I Remember So many Good Times and even the few bad times non the less,
But For you my faraway friend  - I can only think of the best.

Yes today is a Day that I will always reflect on you.
And yes in many ways it makes my heart blue.

There were some things about you, that surely I did not like,
You can surely say the same and This I will never deny.

But all the Reasons why I Love You are Bigger than the Sky!

Tonight is still Thursday, because I have not yet gone to sleep,
Tonight was Not a night of sorrow, nor one that one might Weep.

Tonight is a night that I celebrate you, and on this day till the end of my days forever I will,
You helped me grow so much as a Man that in my soul I feel so thrilled!

There is such a beautiful piano singing in my head, it is you that
is playing that makes me feel so rosy, warm and red.

I can’t help but smile and have dreamy eyes when I think of you,
Tonight at the five spot I tip my Cosmopolitan to you.

You have such a very special place in my heart and in my life,
It is because of what we shared and you and I almost became,
but even as just my Friend, I love you just the same!

Your Friend Always,
Mark



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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-10-05 12:22 PM


Very nice, Mark.  Wonderful illustrations through words.
Alicia

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

2 posted 2000-10-05 03:13 PM


This is a beautiful tribute.  Quite different than your other writings...I am happy to hear your heart sing.

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
3 posted 2000-10-05 04:51 PM


What a wonderful gift for your friend, both the poem and the friendship.

Keith Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Moon Dust
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4 posted 2000-10-05 06:23 PM


wow i'm sure she'll love this

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Moon Dust
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5 posted 2000-10-05 06:24 PM


wow i'm sure she'll love this

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
6 posted 2000-10-05 11:07 PM


What a lovely way to remember a past love, and how nice that you can still be friends!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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