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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
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Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-10-04 08:30 AM


If you say stay, then stay I shall
And if you say go, then away I will
If you say friendship is all you need
Then I'll be here, I will not leave.

But I cannot do each of the three
You have to pick one, that's all I can be
Whichever you pick, lover, enemy, friend
I'll do my best to make it till the end

But soon it will be time for me to run
And leave behind things that may yet be undone
I'd try to explain, but you already know
About all of the reasons I really must go

If you'd like, I'll stay in touch
Perhaps we can meet, talk over brunch
There's one more thing you may want to do
It's the final option, the choice is up to you

When the day comes that I must leave
You're more then welcome to come with me
If you stay, I'll not be mad
Find the happiness you've never had.

I'll wish you luck and be on my way
Unless you ask of me to stay
You know I'll always be your friend
If you don't understand, read this again.



With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

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Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

1 posted 2000-10-04 03:13 PM


WOW )  This particularly touched my heart...there was a guy who I cared about sooo much that I was willing to be whatever he needed just so that I could be part of his life.  I think you have proved the most ultimate level of love for this person.  The kind of love that is willing to let go.....great piece!.beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
2 posted 2000-10-04 06:49 PM


Wonderfull.  This one is touching, how you reach out to your friend and aske them what they want you to be.  Great work.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
3 posted 2000-10-05 06:42 PM


This is a lovely piece

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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