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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I aint moving I aint going nowhere I’m just sitting here glued to my chair I can’t see clear I can’t see no Point The music is rocking my head is disjoint The rhythm kinda moves me I wanna groove But I aint saying ….I got nothing to prove Just can’t be bothered…. no not tonight Maybe I’ll see clearer in the morning light But wait a minute my mind is… unlocking My thoughts are reeling sliding and rocking The flashing neon holds me ……locks in tight Ok maybe I’ll try it.... go whirling all right Slippin and slidin my jelly bone soul You gotta see it.. watch them ole bones roll It aint pretty but it seems Ok…….. to me You only ever get .....just what you see Moving and a grooving ducking and a boppin Once you hit the groove there’s just no stopping Elastic arms ……….and twizzlin fast legs There aint no tent could be held with these pegs Running to fast……… pull it right down slow There’s only a certain speed this joy train can go Move back to your chair….you’re looking all round Still kinda twitchy you’re still…. feeling the sound That was sorta special……..sorta felt really good Perhaps they’ll make a film…..you know Hollywood They aint seen nothing……. nothing like that If they give me a call ……I’ll call them right back But until then…………….. I aint moving I aint going nowhere I’m just sitting here glued to my chair I can’t see clear I can’t see no Point The music is rocking my head is disjoint Jon Mewett My Daddy once said to me 'Be original son be original' [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Jon; so fine! I love to go crazy all by myself, dancing in the kitchen and letting loose.You are definitly original, this is such a cool poem, love it! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
That is definitely original..  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Oh yes. I liked this poem. Such rythem in the lines! Joy Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, Old time is still a-flying, And this same flower that smiles today To-morrow will be dying. -Robert Herrick |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
definately orginal, i love the style  There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thakyou dancing people.........yeah sometimes it really gets you......wooooh moves yer about a bit.... I think it might have passed now... :0:0Jon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well I hope it passed..old elastic arms and twizzlin legs..haha gave me a broad smile reading this original write... ~~soft thoughts for the morning Maureen |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I love to dance! If you want to come over later, I am getting out my swing CDs. Would love to have you join me! Alicia |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hey Alicia we could form 'The Cyber Jivers'.....sounds cool hey!  Thanx Jon [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
FANTASTIC jon..a fun read.. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
thanx Victoria very kind...... Jon |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
John Travolta moooove over!!!!! I was swaying to the music with this one Jon.... wonderful, "upbeat" poem! Bonnie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jon..i love this!! laughing all the way thru  such visuals in my mind!!hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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