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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-10-03 06:46 PM


The crystal tears shed
flowing from a wounded heart
that God's Love doth heal


Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2000-10-03 09:40 PM


Sometimes it takes the contrasting emotions to appreciate the wonderful ones which become such a comfort and a blessing to us. We all have ordeals/ but we also have one who can help mind the hurts- and restore the Joy if we will let Him.  God Bless you Sis,  David

WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2000-10-04 01:49 AM


You've expressed the hurt and shown the healing.....all in a well-rounded senryu.
May you feel His healing powers quickly!  

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-10-04 07:25 AM


your Senryu rings true......

Jon

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2000-10-05 12:15 PM


This is beautiful, a wonderful expression of faith.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
5 posted 2000-10-05 05:45 AM


ellie ...beautiful thoughts
~~soft smiles
Maureen

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
6 posted 2000-10-05 09:14 AM


Yes, HE is a friend of a wounded heart.
HE knows the need.
Before we ask, the answer is on the way...
Deb  

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