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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-10-03 05:33 PM


Stars
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Stars shining brightly
In the black velvety sky
Perfect in design
*
Twinkling with hope
Holding eternal secrets
That only night holds
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~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-10-03 06:22 PM


These really shine, bright and beautiful!
                                   Ellie

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2000-10-03 06:55 PM


ellie - Thank you!  

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-10-03 07:02 PM


RosePetals~
Exquisite thoughts that fairly twinkle on the page.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Chanson
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4 posted 2000-10-04 02:06 AM


You truly shine, rosepetals!  

...chanson~

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Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



Jon Mewett
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5 posted 2000-10-04 07:20 AM


lovely Rose just twinkly......

Jon

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6 posted 2000-10-04 03:33 PM


I love to watch the stars at night, and in this haiku as well

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Honeybee
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7 posted 2000-10-04 03:50 PM


Tara,

This haiku is a shining example of your talent!    I loved this!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



rosepetals25
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8 posted 2000-10-04 05:59 PM


Marge - Thank you for stopping in

chansondegeste - Aww.. thank you for your nice comments  

Jon - Thanks for stopping by, thank you!

Maria - I'm glad you liked it!  

Melissa - Aww... You are so sweet! Thank you   


CitiZen-One
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9 posted 2000-10-05 05:15 PM


I felt the cellestial milk pouring through me. It was a moment of heavenly quenching.
Dennis L. White
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10 posted 2000-10-09 07:32 PM


Rose,
  Wonderful celestial imagery and so well written.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



vlraynes
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11 posted 2000-10-09 08:33 PM



RosePetals-
  these are just beautiful.
  wonderful imagery.  
  
  -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


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