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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-10-02 11:50 PM


Chill Spill
~*Marge Tindal*~

Winter grips the dawn
Chilled breath's icy fingertips
Frost lays on the lawn




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kcsgrandma
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1 posted 2000-10-03 12:17 PM


Brrrr!  I need a sweater!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Jon Mewett
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2 posted 2000-10-03 02:43 AM


You deal with the seasons so well Marge....this is great.

Jon

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3 posted 2000-10-03 04:55 AM



Marge-
WOW!  I live in phoenix, arizona, but I
think I need my winter coat after this one.     I
I love it.  

love ya,
-vicky


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Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-10-03 07:00 PM


KCS~
That's what I'd need to and a blankey !

Jon~
Why, I thank you for that comment.

Vicky~
Well, here in Florida, it's a long time
in coming, but I know some who have already
been visited by Jack Frost.
I don't like cold ... but it writes pretty !
~*Marge*~


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BloomingRose
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5 posted 2000-10-05 09:58 AM


Marge
Once again wonderful write.
There are few as good a writer as you!

Deb

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-10-06 04:19 AM



Frost caressing grass
within mornings wakeup hugs
breathing days promise



Victoria
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7 posted 2000-10-06 12:19 PM


I love the autumn...it is so beautiful..
enjoyed Marge..but it is getting chilly ha ha

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8 posted 2000-10-06 08:18 PM


Anything by you writes pretty, Marge!  

Denise

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9 posted 2000-10-06 08:32 PM


BloomingRose~
What a nice comment.  I love all writers !

MarkB~
Snuggling closer ...
You just gave me a hug to melt the frost.

Victoria~
I don't like the chill factor either.
When it occasionally comes it lays a pretty
picture on the lawn.

Denise~
Sweetest thing you could have said.
I thank you ... as always, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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CitiZen-One
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10 posted 2000-10-06 10:49 PM


minty freshness and lovely. you captured such beauty with such few words.
BSC
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11 posted 2000-10-07 03:35 PM


Sounds like you have been in my backyard Marge....A lovely picture this brought to mind.  Bonnie
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CitizenOne~
Thank you for the read.

Bonnie~
I cavort among the butterflies and wrens
in my yard ...
yet untouched by the frosty fingertips.
I hope it's a long time coming.
Love ya' gal !
~*Marge*~


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13 posted 2000-10-08 01:30 PM



Dennis L. White
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14 posted 2000-10-08 08:19 PM


Marge,

Chilly wake up call
Jack Frost paints with crystal frost
Chills us to the bone

Your talents amuse and amaze me.
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2000-10-08 09:52 PM


Dennis~
Why, thank you, sir !
Nice poetic reply also.
~*Marge*~


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