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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-10-01 06:28 PM


Narrow Trickle first,
Meahandering though passage,
Now busting its banks.


There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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1 posted 2000-10-01 07:04 PM


Maria - I could see the river running in this little gem.  Great job.  Bonnie
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2 posted 2000-10-01 07:52 PM


Must be a spring river.  Very nice.

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- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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3 posted 2000-10-01 08:16 PM


Thanks both for reading

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-10-02 05:25 AM


I love the sound of rivers rushing...nicely done, Maria
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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5 posted 2000-10-02 03:01 PM


Ther's a lot of water about today....but I could dip my toes in this one....

JON

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6 posted 2000-10-02 03:39 PM


MMoonchild - thank you

Jon - You can dip yours toes in anytime you want

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Ethan Halo
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7 posted 2000-10-02 07:51 PM


very beautiful words. i thought of that Pocahantas song from the movie...
you create your Haikus very well. thanks for responding to the challenge  

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

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