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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-30 07:53 PM


Sometimes wind whispers,
Passes though me,
As do wishes freely written,
Spoken to the star above,

And that star,
If feeling generous,
Listens wishes and remembers,
Grants them from heaven sent,

Now though out of wishes,
Spent them all long ago,
Only wish is now,
That I made the most of them.


There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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kcsgrandma
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1 posted 2000-09-30 10:13 PM


Nice wistful feeling to this.  I hope you're not really out of wishes.  Maybe you miscounted?

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Chanson
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2 posted 2000-09-30 10:26 PM


Hindsight is always 20/20.
Don't be so hard on yourself.
Tomorrow is a new day, may it
be well for you  

...chanson~

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Caresses the harshest of curves.
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Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-10-01 03:52 PM


Maria~
I liked the wishful thinking here.
Throw another wish among the stars !
You just might get a meteor shower of wishes come true !
~*Marge*~


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Moon Dust
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4 posted 2000-10-01 05:57 PM


KCS - Nahhhh, I hope not anyway

Chanson - Thanks, it was just a bit of a low moment

Marge - yeah, Thanks.

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 2000-10-09 09:45 PM


Maria, You did a nice job expressing a time of sadness, may each day you become more in touch with the wishes that parade around all our stars.  
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