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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Why I Love You Your gentle green eyes Your warm inviting smile Your soft light caress For the man you are right now And the man you will become ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A perfect tanka dedicated to the man that you love. Have you given this to him yet? Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is indeed beautiful. The love shines in every line. Thank you for sharing. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa - I haven't seen him yet.. but he will get it  Thank you stopping in.. and incase you didn't see my reply to your other poem in #10.. welcome back ~hugs~kcsgrandma - Thank you for your comments They are so nice |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ Delightfully well done Tanka. I see you've become enraptured with the Japanese forms. Great ... they are all such fun to do ... and creatively challenging. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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