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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-28 09:43 PM


Sun rises gently,
Pass over morning dew breeze ,
Beckons a new day.


There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-09-28 10:55 PM


There's nothing like a beautiful sunrise!!

Denise

kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2000-09-29 12:17 PM


You mean people actually get up and see those things?
Jon Mewett
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3 posted 2000-09-29 04:16 AM


I try to look away..........but the sun rises in your eyes.........well in your verse anyway.

lovely

Jon

Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2000-09-29 06:55 AM


Maria,
  Beautiful haiku moment, thanks for sharing!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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5 posted 2000-09-29 09:49 AM


~Maria~

A lovely haiku, I, too love the hope of a sunrise  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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6 posted 2000-09-30 05:30 PM


Beautifully put Maria, this one's great
Moon Dust
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7 posted 2000-09-30 06:28 PM


Denise-ta, there isn't is there
KSC-yep early job i'm afaid
Jon, Densis,melissa & LW - Thank you



There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Chanson
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8 posted 2000-09-30 10:31 PM


This is very pretty, Maria  

...chanson~

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9 posted 2000-09-30 11:25 PM


Maria~
Beautifully done !
Very vividly portrayed.

And LOL @ KCS !
~*Marge*~


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Moon Dust
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10 posted 2000-10-01 06:04 PM


Thanks Chanson and Marge

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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