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Sun Rise Haiku |
Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Sun rises gently, Pass over morning dew breeze , Beckons a new day. There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There's nothing like a beautiful sunrise!! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You mean people actually get up and see those things? |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I try to look away..........but the sun rises in your eyes.........well in your verse anyway. lovely Jon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, Beautiful haiku moment, thanks for sharing! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Maria~ A lovely haiku, I, too love the hope of a sunrise Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Beautifully put Maria, this one's great |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Denise-ta, there isn't is there KSC-yep early job i'm afaid Jon, Densis,melissa & LW - Thank you There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is very pretty, Maria ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ Beautifully done ! Very vividly portrayed. And LOL @ KCS ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks Chanson and Marge There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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