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Jon Mewett
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0 posted 2000-09-28 06:45 AM


Beauty in my life enhance
You hold my hand
My feelings dance
I’m willing here
To take a chance
Are you?

A vision stands before my eyes
She’s beautiful
My wanting cries
My love goes on
It never dies
For you

All the buildings of blue brick
From my watch
Blue seconds tick
Shining brand new
Blue steel car
In the sky
Blue shining star
Everything around me
Blue
That’s what I’d be
If I lost you
You

My love for you
I cannot hide
My life’s a magic
Carpet ride
A carousel
Revolves inside
For you

If I ever make
You cry
I know sometimes
I don’t know why
But you know your tears
I’ll wipe them dry
For you

So if you let me
Sing my song
It won’t be short
I’ll make it long
You look so fine
In that silk dress
Take it now
My warm caress
Kiss my tears
I’ll right all wrong
For you

Jon




[This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 09-28-2000).]

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BSC
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1 posted 2000-09-28 09:26 AM


Ohhhhhh so beautiful Jon!!!!  Bonnie
Dennis L. White
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2 posted 2000-09-28 11:48 AM


Jon,  
  A beautiful declaration of love and commitment! WELL DONE!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

3 posted 2000-09-28 01:52 PM


Ummmm......well....okay I'll just cut to the point WILL YOU MARRY ME?  just kiddin, seriously you are extremely romantic, I hope she realizes how wonderful and rare that is.  I really enjoyed this , jon  
......beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2000-09-28 06:14 PM


Glad you reconsidered!  It is enough to win any lady's heart, I think.  
Moon Dust
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5 posted 2000-09-28 06:19 PM


wow this is so beauiful.

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere
6 posted 2000-09-29 02:25 AM


Hey Jon, you have any brothers?  Just joking... The lady's very special to have you in her life.   Good luck to the both of you.

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

7 posted 2000-09-29 04:34 AM


This Owl as been sitting on this branch just watching the world go by......and hooting a little bit......and one day he caught a glimpse of the spring dawn and was really excited....but then he realised he was happy being an owl........but he so enjoyed the robins singing.

He treasured their song forever.


Thanx for singing to the Owl everyone




Jon



Honeybee
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Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2000-09-29 10:05 AM



Ahhh Jon...this is beautiful with such devotion!    It's good to see you pen a love poem, where's mine?!    LOL

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



rosepetals25
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9 posted 2000-09-30 12:17 PM


Jon,

   I swear I left a reply for this.. but I guess I must be going crazy!    So I can you tell you now that I liked this poem even more than I did the first time I read it   Well done.

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~~Tara aka rp25  

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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
10 posted 2000-09-30 12:18 PM


ah .. love, so simply complicated.....*sigh....*

(i'm trying to play it cool...this one really got me in the heart!    )

beautiful jon...this is just simply beautiful...what a woman she must be..what a man are you...wow..!

hugs, dg
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theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper


[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-30-2000).]

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

11 posted 2000-09-30 01:56 PM


Wow all these hugs and things are quite intoxicating.........makes me want to {{{{{{{{{{{{{SHAKE}}}}}}}}}}}}}....in a nice way.....


Thanx All

Jon

Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
12 posted 2000-09-30 10:45 PM


Your song resonates beautifully Jon  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2000-09-30 11:14 PM


Jon~
You can sing for me any night of the week !
Nice .... really nice.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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14 posted 2000-10-01 08:42 PM


Me too!! Sing away!!  

Denise

MMoonchild
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15 posted 2000-10-02 05:29 AM


I’ll right all wrong
For you


what more could someone ask for...very nice Jon

~~softsmiles
Maureen

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

16 posted 2000-10-02 02:57 PM


Emmm EMMM Em..............

When I fall in LURVVVVVVE....it will be FUREVER.......or I'll never fall in LLLLurve......How's that?

Maybe not

Jon

Lost Dreamer
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Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
17 posted 2000-10-09 10:07 PM


Jon, Wow, I say Wow, what you've penned here is fabulously romantic, I love it.  
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