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Autumn Haiku Collection part3
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Paint drips off the trees Branches stretch in search of sun Face cold winds alone Empty tree now prays Naked branches lifted high Begs for early Spring .................................................... Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Picturesque. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
with your third set of Haiku Dennis the scene is complete .........really enjoyed them. Regards Jon |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
"Paint drips off the trees"! and off your pen, creating works of art! Love, Sis P.U.Y.M.B. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
((((Wow)))) Dennis this one just rings out. I can't say enough about it. Excellent, just excellent. Garfield |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I agree its a work of art  There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a phenomenal picture of autumn you paint with your words. After reading the first two collections of your Autumn haikus, I'm assuming that Autumn is your favourite season? I enjoyed both, but love the first haiku!Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dennis, So where do I sign up to learn how to write haikus like this??? I believe Melissa called you the haiku king in one of her replies.. and would have to agree!  ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The first one seemed really powerful. Great job on both of these David! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ What an original thought - 'Paint drips off the trees' How perfect is this ???? Wonderfully said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, i can just imagine this solitary tree shivering in the bitter cold....wow |
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