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Autumn Haiku Collection part 2
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Leaves dance in the breeze < !signature-->Released from Summers’ firm grasp Parachute to ground High and noble shade Pride of swelt’ring August days Discarded on ground .................................................... Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Your haikus are beautiful. I like the pictures of autumn leaves you painted in these ones. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Parachuting leaves........how brilliant is that.....terrific Dennis. Jon |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Magnificent imagery! Love, Sis |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Dennis I agree with lil sis. Excellent imagery in this one. I can picture the dancing leaves parachuting to the ground. Garfield |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
another good one, your so good at haikus  There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love both! But my favourite is the first haiku! You are tha haiku king Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dennis, You can say so much with so little. Excellent job I love them.~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree with the others, wonderful imagery here |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Dennis --- Have you been in my yard????? You certainly painted it beautifully! Bonnie |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such vivid descriptons...simply dig the line "parachute to ground" |
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