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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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A Tear Formed in My Heart A tear formed in my heart today It lingered there a while As I sat vigile by your bed Beside your thin profile The tear was felt down in my soul And swelled to see your pain My very core of happiness Was cut and slowly drained The tears of sorrow multiplied And filled my aching heart To think that we would somehow be So cruelly torn apart The drops within me filled the well Of sorrow to the brim Until my eyes could bearly keep The troubled tears within And so they fell upon my face And swelled my weary eyes And ran profusely down my cheeks In streams of painful “whys” But suddenly I glaced at you And there upon your face Was one small tear of happiness That left a teardrop’s trace And through the tear I saw you smile And slowly turn to me You said why do you question Everything that’s meant to be Just think of all the years we had The love of family Would you so question all those splendors Also meant to be? Elizabeth Santos |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Elizabeth, this piece is so sad, and yet so wonderfully happy. Life is a cycle depicted with grace with your words. The scheme was great, the message was real. Life is a celebration, as (atleast I think) is death. Much congrats on a well-written, well thoughtout piece. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is a very nicely structured poem, with a beautiful thought. I like the contrast between the two tears. It is hard to let go, even when we are sure there is something better waiting for our loved ones. You express that very nicely. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear liz; What a man of courage he is, and how beautifully he sees life and with so much love, you have been blessed, that makes what you're suffering all the more intense, I'm sure. God Bless you my friend. Love, Ellie |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A beautiful poem Liz.........simply wonderful. Jon |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Elizabeth..this was read thru tears...what a deep heartfelt poem..from your heart. You have such courage..my prayers go out to you. And I agree with the rest..you are truly blessed....and what an assurance that there is something to look forward to on the other side. Beautiful writing.....Twilah |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Liz, This brought a tear to my eye, reminding me of of things from the past. Your writing is so lovely and heartfelt..so touching. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I admire your strength. This is a very moving poem.............beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
God gives us the strength when we need it...not a minute too soon or too late...rest in that knowledge, Elizabeth. My prayers will continue to be with you, Tony and the children. This is another beautiful expression from your heart. HUGS Love ya Denise |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh my Liz, I can't begin to tell you how this piece has affected me. I just read it to my husband and he had the same reaction. I only hope that in all the years to come I can remember your beautifully written, heartfelt words...Trust me when I say that they have already put many questions to rest for me. Thank you for sharing this, and God Bless you and yours. Bonnie |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*sniffles* Oh wow. This hit me hard.. very beautiful..  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your comments to this poem are overwhelming and so beautiful. Thank you all so very much for responing in such a way. It seems that you are the ones who bring tears to me, tears of joy at having friends that I can talk to through poetry. To all of you, my love and gratefulness Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friend, my friend~ And there are friends here to hold your tears. You are just such a wonderful person and please know that prayers are sent each day. Loving you for sharing your heartfelt thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Liz...this was a wonderfully written emotional piece...I can relate this to my dad a few years ago...it's amazing the strength that one can show another in times of sorrow ...thank you for sharing. many {{hugs}} to comfort you Maureen |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, You always say just the right thing. You have no idea what it means right now Maureen, I'm glad you could relate to this. Thank you for the much needed hug Love Liz |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I knew a tears would form in my eyes as I read this, you brought sadness and thoughts to ponder together in this well written poem. Thanks for sharing your talent here with us, and know my prayers are with you. |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
I was taking a stroll through the archives and came upon this...How lucky I was to come across it. This is very beautiful and touching. Best |
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