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Solstice Son
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0 posted 2000-09-25 10:14 PM


BWA sent me stuff from here all the time.....she told me a story once...a very sad story....afterwards..while I was at work..i thought of this....

love ya hun * hugs*

Whe an Angel falls from Heaven...
there is bound to be some pain...
You'll never hear it in her voice...
But you'll feel it in the rain.

For though her wings be strong and whole...
It's her tender heart that breaks...
And you'll never know the sacrifice...
Each day living that she makes.

For an angel's heart was made to serve...
To cherish, love, protect...
And never will she fathom....
How some hurt, maim, and reject.

Each day she lives the will of God...
As we walk along our way...
And though she battles thanklessly...
She dies a bit each day.

Now if you dare to love an Angel...
Then here is where you start...
Seek out soon, the ' broken 'place...

...and fill it with your Heart.



© Copyright 2000 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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1 posted 2000-09-25 11:14 PM


This is nice. Hope the next angel that falls runs into you.  
CitiZen-One
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2 posted 2000-09-26 09:41 PM


I lost an angel myself.
Broken_Winged_Angel
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3 posted 2000-09-28 05:43 AM


  A while ago each day that passed
    Made me wish it was my last.
    But people I can call my friend
    Help me at night to begin again.


Thankyou again, Solstice.     Just knowing you're out there has helped alot...Take care of yourself, k?  Always,
  Nicole
   Broken Winged Angel

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Watcher
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4 posted 2000-11-23 08:17 AM


spoken well solice.  i'm glad she's got friends liek you
bestgirl911
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5 posted 2000-11-24 08:47 AM


Sol...

And we were lucky enough to have an angel fall right in our midst. Very touching Adam.

Best

Denise
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6 posted 2000-11-24 09:22 AM


This is very beautiful, Sol!

Denise

Suzanne Arlene
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7 posted 2000-11-24 10:23 AM


That was a beautiful poem.I really liked the ending.   Suzanne
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8 posted 2000-11-25 08:33 PM


SolticeSon~
This just happens to be WONDERFUL !
~*Marge*~


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Honeybee
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9 posted 2000-11-25 09:21 PM



Beautifully penned, your best poem yet!  I love angels and I love the message conveyed!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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10 posted 2000-11-25 11:06 PM


Me gusto mucho!

Loved it!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Solstice Son
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11 posted 2000-11-27 07:49 AM


oh my...thanks everyone....its been so long since I have read this one myself....glad it still makes me..and apparantly you all as well ...still feel as deeply...the message still applies...for BWA and all of the 'angels' well love..

Sol

Broken_Winged_Angel
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12 posted 2000-11-28 08:13 AM


Sol...    This is still unbelievably sweet and makes me feel wonderful to read it.. Thankyou again.. and again... and again... and... Well, you get the point..    Love ya lots hon..
  Always,
    Nicole
      Broken Winged Angel

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