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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-24 08:47 PM



Wind Dancer
~*Marge Tindal*~


Colorful ballerinas,
dancing on autumn's wind.
Twirling, swirling
pirouetting in the wind.


The earth is your stage.
Dance ballerinas, dance.
Swirling, twirling
dancing in the wind.


The dance too soon over,
as the winds subside.
Time to put autumn's tutu's aside.





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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1 posted 2000-09-24 11:10 PM


Beautiful, Marge!! Very beautiful!!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-09-25 12:26 PM


This is truly lovely, and perfect for this time of year!
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3 posted 2000-09-25 01:58 AM


Denise~
I kind of figured you'd enjoy it.

KCS~
Thank you so much.
Welcome to Passions In Poetry.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lady Lost
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4 posted 2000-09-25 08:13 AM


This is so lovely..and Colorful!  I really enjoyed this one, Marge!.......beth

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- REA

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5 posted 2000-09-25 08:28 AM


Love this "colorful" piece Marge.... I only wish someone would come and rake up all of those little "tutus!!!"  Bonnie
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6 posted 2000-09-25 10:37 AM


Wow Marge, this is a perfect colorful Autumn poem! ...and dancing leaves, I can see them flitting in the wind  

...chanson~

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Caresses the harshest of curves.
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7 posted 2000-09-25 10:04 PM


LadyLost~
Thanks, hon.

Bonnie~
LOL !  I know what you mean !

Chanson~
Nice to know you enjoyed the 'flit'.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge-
   this is wonderful!  i love it.  
   ...and there you go with those colors
   again.  

   love and hugs,
           -vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Dennis L. White
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9 posted 2000-09-28 07:59 PM


Marge,
  This is beautiful in imagery and presentation! How delightfully you display your wonderful talents.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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10 posted 2000-09-28 09:57 PM


love it Marge..tip toeing away..
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11 posted 2000-09-29 07:46 AM


Vicky~
I get such joy in sharing the colors.
Glad you like !

Dennis~
Thank you, my friend.

Victoria~
Glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for the reply.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Honeybee
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12 posted 2000-09-29 10:02 AM



Now, Marge, you know that I couldn't stay away from passions for long.  Especially with you here! I've only been gone about a week and it felt like a year, this place is addictive.  I loved this poem, it's so marvelously childlike and so well expressed with that Marge flair! It paints a beautiful picture...what a dance it is!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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13 posted 2000-10-01 03:44 PM


Melissa~
Yeah ..... and your friendship is addictive too !

Thanks for recognizing the childlike playfulness in this piece.
The leaves do a scurried little dance across the yard ... like children at play.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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14 posted 2000-10-02 05:36 AM


beautiful Marge..you began  my day in a colorful way
~~soft  thanks
Maureen

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15 posted 2000-10-02 07:14 AM


Maureen~
Thanks for letting me know.
Have a wonderful day !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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16 posted 2000-10-09 10:00 PM


Marge, You brought a cheerful glowing smile to my face with this poem, thanks for sharing it here with us.  
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