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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
This is another RP poem...for the one lady who made the biggest impact on me..ever...her..passion for writing left me speechless....when you get to know me..you'll know how rare that is... hats off to you Cheeky Blue Cat...all my love.. .................................................... There is a moment, caught in time... When I dared to think she might be mine... But when I stopped and tried to ask... I found the moment sadly past. And now its stands, in waking dream... A faded rainbow more felt than seen... A quiet promise of my heart... That in that moment we shall not part... Pressed like petals, in my mind... Lay all her words, both hurt and kind... The scent of clover, like headdy wine... And in that field, she still is mine. Beneath the Moon, all silver-pale... My heartship now will surely sail... Until it rests beneath that tree... Alone with you, blue memory. And though I try , with all my might... The Moon won't rise again tonight... yet once it did, above that tree... where once two lovers could be seen... there is a moment.... ..........caught in time.... (( borrow and show yur friends if you like...steal it and die  AMMS~2000 )) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Denise |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is very nice..sad that the moment passed without the right words said..but beautiful writing.. hugs, dg i'm growin' i dont like it i'm growin' and it hurts i love you but i'm tired i guess i've got a lot to learn -w. watson |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Very nice indeed.......lovely picture.....those soughts of nights I like. Jon |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Hey hon.... I like this.. Wanna know my favorite part? "There is a moment, caught in time... When I dared to think she might be mine... But when I stopped and tried to ask... I found the moment sadly past. "  To often the moments past. Anyhow..I'm off to find some more thoughts to mull over. Take care. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
now why cant those moments last forever?? There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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